This had the potential to be a fantastic story if the chapters were much longer, more developed and not disjointed from one another.

I loved the story, it was sweet and sad at the same time. I have noticed a few mistakes, but never fear, you have great potential with future stories. And I'm sure you will excel in time, leaving the others winded. Thank you for writing this. :)

First off...despite what cruel hearted people might say, please do NOT stop writing. Interesting how the cruelest remarks come from people too chicken to leave their name or sign in. You have a talent, time and practice will develop it.

My husband's grandmother died from the disease you write about. It is a sad thing. And yes, I believe after death there is such a place and won't it be wondeful when things like this disease are no longer around. :)

loved this story so much! could hear the girls' conversations in my heads and i think they were all pretty much in character.

write more soon!

so far, so good.

i loved the entire thing!

that was THE stupidest story i have ever read!

no need to respond to me - i'm NOT taking your stupid advice.

you can take mine - STOP WRITING!

i know this is marie s zachary - i recongize the same stupid spelling and other errors that happen in all of her stupid stories.

please stop writing, for all our sakes.

Sad, but sweet epilogue.

Good one Rose.

Not a good sign.

That doesn't sound good.