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  eh 5/20/12 . chapter 2 I think you should have kept it with one chapter. I enjoyed reading that one. This, on the other hand, not even close. It was ridiculous, in a bad way. Actually it was kind of stupid and a let down,Nor did it match the feeling. Its like you went from a serious feeling fiction somthing you would want to worry about to a crack where all you can do is roll your eyes at. Off the hardthe words. I do give you a ton ofprops though for a good first chapter, and in my opinion it should have been left like that to give the reader somthing to create in their own minds. |
| NCISer 5/20/12 . chapter 2 Oh, this is "complete". So nevermind. I hadn't realized that the first incomplete chapter was supposed to be a one-shot and that you had added yet another incomplete feeling chapter and still consider this "complete". I think I'll just pass on your stories altogether. |
| NCISer 5/20/12 . chapter 2 Maybe you should have left it at writer's block and not continued. He wasn't eating of sleeping for a movie marathon? How ridiculous and downright stupid. And now he's choking on an apple. Jeez. I was interesting in this story, but since you've decided to go such an inane route with it, instead of something serious, I think I'll pass from here on out. |
 Corala 5/20/12 . chapter 2Poor Tony now will be ok i do hope and i can Gibbs will make him eat |
| DarkRose4u 5/16/12 . chapter 1 loved the ending. :D |
| Daisy 5/13/12 . chapter 1 Por Tony...why hasn't he eaten anything? |
| Ranma 5/13/12 . chapter 1 Continue don't stop |
| Corala 5/13/12 . chapter 1 It eas good and did you or not faint |
| Downey for President 5/13/12 . chapter 1 haha hilarious tell me how it went on tuesday XD |
| tansysam 5/12/12 . chapter 1 good story but it needs an ending, whats wrong with tony, is it serious, wheres ducky ect, |
| Long Live BRUCAS 5/12/12 . chapter 1 Good but short. This would make a great story to be longer. |
| NickTonyK 5/12/12 . chapter 1 Loved it! Needs a second chapter so Gibbs can give Tony some food and tlc. Gibbs needs to find out what's bothering Tony so much that he hasn't eaten. |
| Kushie 5/12/12 . chapter 1 Is there nothing that can't be cured by Gibbs slapping? I hope you are going to expand on this. why hadn't Tony been eating Promising start. |
| mstictac 5/12/12 . chapter 1 Cute fic. I like it when they all care about each other in not so obvious ways, and especially Gibbs and Tony. Nicely done. |
| Meilea2010 5/12/12 . chapter 1 Fantasstic story. Question for you, why didn't they call Ducky to check Tony out? It could be something serious? Any chance that there could be more to this? Hope so. |
