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ElderscrollsPony 1/6/13 . chapter 1 Where is the chapter with other characters, we are all waiting, so please post it! Thank you for your time. |
ElderscrollsPony 11/24/12 . chapter 1 Also, Starfire has learned to fight because sometimes the harassment isn't just verbal. |
ElderscrollsPony 11/24/12 . chapter 1 Hey peoples, just submitting my OC, I am changing him to fit to the story. Note: if you want to take out the thing about the cutie mark that is fine. I just put that in there because of my story.P.S. I am finishing my story before posting it. Name: Starfire Gender: Stallion Species: Pegasus Apperence:Very pale almost white blue coat, emerald eyes, ragged rainbow mane and tail Cutie mark: None till he is in his adult years, around 'bout 20 Likes:True friends, nice people, family, flying with dad, helping out sister, math, P.E. Dislikes: Bullies, L.A., S.S., annoying class mates, people who like him just because his parents are wonder bolts Background: Often harassed at school 'cause of lack of cutie mark, he has a tough exterior but a tender and warm hearted center, making it painful when insulted. Can not talk to mares not from his family without getting nervos, but tries to be a polite gentalcolt. Sometimes harassed because they think he should be able to defend himself because his parents are wonder bolts. |
ElderscrollsPony 11/24/12 . chapter 1 CONTINUE NOW! I mean... you know.. if that is alright. Please? Will a brohoof help? /) How 'bout a happy face? :) Excited face? :D Sad face? ); PLEEEAAASSSE? |
Guest 9/3/12 . chapter 1 A male cyan pegasus with a spiked navy blue mane, and dark green eyes |
bestponyRD 7/20/12 . chapter 1 that was good but if there were more of the story it would be better |
Alapest 7/5/12 . chapter 1Awesome story so far. As for your contest: Cobalt is a boy unicorn who is very overprotective of his sister. He has a blue mane, and a rainbow colored body. He has major ADD and so he is quite hyper at times, and he also is really into being weird (he says that weird is just a five letter word that describes a person that knows how to have fun). |
Silverfire 5/22/12 . chapter 1 Hiya shadow! Amazing story! My OC Shadowy Dawn (Dawn for short) Shes a pitch black Pegasus with an inverted rainbow mane and tail that are neon. She has cyan barbs on her wings and pink ones behind those. She takes after her mother by being brash and bold. FlutterMac (If you want!) Honeycluster A small orange earth pony with a pink Mane and a southern accent. Her cutie mark will be a green apple with pink butterfly wings representing her love for nature. She is kind and sweet not caring about accidents- takes after her mother Twixie(again If you want) Galaxy A turquoise unicorn with a hot pink mampne and purple and blue hilights. His cutie mark will be a star with a cape and a heart. This represents her live for creating magic shoes that show the power of love. He is a kind,honest,humble colt with a defending aggressive side. He has a crush on UV |
anissa1999 5/19/12 . chapter 1Name: Lightning Bolt Age: A bit older than UV Type: Pegasus Fur: Mother's color Mane: Mother's style, father's color. Eyes: Mother's color Personality: Strong, brave, and a bit of a dimwitt, but is still fun to hang with. Strangely, his talent was both singing and flying fast, so he has a lightning bolt with a eighteenth note in it. His father likes that he sings, but RD thinks that it's "20% less cooler than flying." :D |
bronygamer96 5/12/12 . chapter 1Well. How about a red pegasus colt with a skyblue mane and tail with rose colored eyes. If you want to use my OC at all just let me know I will give u a detailed description of him. P.S the one I mentioned above isn't my OC , it just one I could think of. |