| Reviews for Future's Price |
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Guest 5/19/13 . chapter 1 Hi plz update Harry potter and the ghost of Amity soon! -Thx! |
pinkpolkadots71 5/16/13 . chapter 3Wow! Thank you for updating this story again. I now have hope that it hasn't been abandoned. I like how this rewrite is diverging from the original. It makes it much more interesting. Please update again soon. |
Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko 5/16/13 . chapter 3All I have to say is "SQUEE!" |
mndstjohn 5/15/13 . chapter 3Looks good! |
Duesal10 5/15/13 . chapter 3I really like this story, but why must Naruto lose his humanity? Why? Anyway, congratulations on thinking up such a good time-travel. Gook luck with the rest of the rewrite! |
Flaming Beauty 5/15/13 . chapter 3It's a toss up for me I love both versions. The extra details and explanations your giving to this fic is also super amazing! Pls keep up the great work! Looking forward to more updates. |
devil M 5/15/13 . chapter 3Wow that is a big change compare to the previous one...hope u don't over power them n is there going to many big changes after? |
ILOVEANIME123 5/15/13 . chapter 3More please! |
LuffyMarra 5/15/13 . chapter 3Yaaayy good chapter. Can't wait to read more. |
snowecat 5/15/13 . chapter 3Just as gripping as the original. It's wonderful to see you posting again. Here's hoping things improve for you. |
csad21 5/13/13 . chapter 2I'm glad you're taking up this story again, though seeing as it's not been updated in a year, begs the question if you've already given up on it. Which would be a pity, as I remember I was inordinately fond of "The Price of the Future". I hope you find the time and interest to continue. Though, if I may, I have one request if you do continue it: can you please, please change "Gennin" to "genin"? For some reason, it's a pet peeve of mine and annoys the heck out of me. |
ILOVEANIME123 3/29/13 . chapter 2More please! Have I ever tell you how much I love you? If not, then I love you! |
Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 2 Not sure if you allow anonymous reviews or not and honestly...I'm too tired to log in to my account. I just wanted to say, thank you for trying to find your creativeness once again in writing this fic once again. I must admit though, I actually liked your original second chapter better. Your first only had minor changes, probably due to fixing future plot holes. However, this second chapter just wasn't as FUN as your original. Not saying you should stop! Not at all. Just saying it felt a bit more dry than the original. I'm sure as you get back into the groove of things it will flow more naturally to you. :) missa01 (Missaness) |
Guest 2/26/13 . chapter 2 While I'm happy to see a re-write, the original story's chapters weren't THAT long - and you really only just put up the extremely short prologue and chapter one (which doesn't need much fixing). 9 months ago. Come on! No, I'm no writer - but it doesn't take years of reading fics to know that most stories get abandoned because the author didn't have a plot in mind. That seems to be where you faltered originally (albeit you could've at least dragged it out a coupla chapters, until the Chuunin Exam or something). You're going to hit the wall again here - assuming you haven't already, it's been 9 months FFS - unless you write down the outline. |
Baylock 2/20/13 . chapter 2Can't wait for it to be finished! I love it! |