Oh wow, I haven't even realized your long updates, but I'm glad you're still sticking with this story. Short chapter, yes, but it's still very good. I can't wait for the next chapter! A little tip I've received that might help is this; when writing, always reread your work, and say them out loud. It'll help you hear the obvious mistakes. Keep up the good work!
(Also, I find Hawkeye/Lise to be better than Hawkeye/Jessica :] )

Glad to see you've edited this. If I may, you should let other people outside of read over this and let them review this story and get their feedbacks. Update soon please, i would like to know where this is going. Keep up the good work