Oh, I did so love the book. I was going to write an alternative ending myself, and even had an outline of how the last few chapters would have been if she hadn't died, but after reading the book a second time, I just couldn't do it. As sad and tragic as it is, it ended the way it had to.

Still, this was nice.

well, ending along those lines certainly wouldn't break my heart like the real one did, so it was nice to read after crying my eyes out everytime I watch the movie.

I read the book and i thought it was brillant but never liked how it ended. I like your ended a better and it was a nice thing to rewrite the ended for your family member. I think one if the reviews of this story just pick out your grammar error which was unfair, keep writing as i enjoyed the story.

Pretty but a few mistakes:

Throw should be through

'know don't get her worry' did you mean 'now don't get her wrong'?

Where should be we're

Also you have no fullstops :P but other than that I thought it was nice- I read the book yesterday and I was in tears, I was absolutely certain that there'd be a happy ending and there wasn't :'(

Pretty but a few mistakes:

Throw should be through

'know don't get her worry' did you mean 'now don't get her wrong'?

Where should be we're

Also you have no fullstops :P but other than that I thought it was nice- I read the book yesterday and I was in tears, I was absolutely certain that there'd be a happy ending and there wasn't :'(

I really like I wish the book had ended like this aswell please continue! :)

Finally! I hated the ending but thank you for this it is my favorite one.

This was the most beautiful and special thing anyone had every wrote for me . I love the ended . Xx