|Reviews for Spiritwing|
| ShadeLivesForever 5/20/12 . chapter 1
This is another one of those revival stories. Nice to have your version added to the mix.
Really, your new stories (continuations) should be added as chapters, since they are so short. The "chapters" of this story do not need to be indicated with numbers and titles; a line break will do just fine.
Also beware of many grammar and spelling mistakes. Who is speaking should also be made clearer. I advise you find a spell checking program, though I think the upload page already contains a spell checker.