|Reviews for Harry Potter: Shadow Sorcerer|
| kail990 5/20/12 . chapter 14
Wonderfull chapter. Great idea to give Neville an original potter wand. Looking forward to the chapter where Harry activates the ancient wards.
| DZ2 5/20/12 . chapter 14
It's nice that Harry sees Neville as a brother-in-arms and the new wand was well designed;
I foresee Hermione being a bit of a problem, but hopefully she'll see the light very soon.
| karthik9 5/20/12 . chapter 14
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
| ElDani 5/20/12 . chapter 13
In my first review, for the chapter that started this story, I was a bit critical because of repeated verb tense errors. Now, after having read through all thirteen chapters I need to put that into perspective. Either I have become accustomed to those imperfections or the first chapter is just worse than the rest. No matter, I must say that I have enjoyed reading "Shadow Sorcerer" a lot so far and will be awaiting each new chapter with anticipation.
There's one thing I just HAVE to mention, though: did you truly write this story, all 13 chapters so far, in a time-frame of only one week? Two chapters with almost 15 thousand words per day is an incredibly high rate which I've never seen here on fanfiction dot net before. It's a good thing that I started reading yesterday and caught up today, because I doubt I'd be able to keep up with the story during the regular working week, you're just writing too fast for me to read ;)
| Midoriryu 5/19/12 . chapter 3
Only a minor nit-pick in this chapter, she had Hedwig thrilling, when the word that should have been used is trilling.
| Midoriryu 5/19/12 . chapter 1
Well, not much to say so far as yet. It looks interesting, but I'm waiting go give a more certain judgement. The only complaint I have at this time is the unfortunately common occurrence of present tense words when they should be past tense.
| Ohaeolin 5/19/12 . chapter 13
A very promising start for your story. Having been a fan of David Eddings, I very much enjoy the blend with the Belgarion series. A few minor difficulties with spelling and usage, but not anything to detract from the overall story. Please keep writing on this, I am very interested in seeing where you go with it.
| Dahasmaga 5/19/12 . chapter 12
Are you really trying to say that this Harry isn't an Über powerful wizard? Seriously?
As of chapter 13, Harry has an über amount of political, social, economic and magical power. He can wipe the floor with all the challenges up to the canon 5th year. He has a small army of house elves, telepathy, a white phoenix, a sentient castle and stave, a whole new method of magic which noone has any defences against, and a whole lot of other ridiculously overpowered abilities.
If you really think this isn't an overpowered Harry then you are fooling yourself.
And not arrogant? Harry thinks he has the right to use telepathy to change peoples minds and does so to muggles while at Privet Drive. Either thats a sign of arrogance, autism or idiocy.
Not to say that this is necessarily a bad thing. I'm enjoying it, want to see where you take the plot, and I'm glad that you aren't shoving a romance in. But I would be very disappointed if you decide to keep the same plot and challenges that the canon Harry faced.
| Coru 32 5/19/12 . chapter 13
another wonderful chapter
| sammy 5/19/12 . chapter 13
amazing work... hope u keep updating
| HP Fan 5/19/12 . chapter 13
great story so far, keep it up. Update soon please
| Schnuff 5/19/12 . chapter 2
Our dear Harry is powerful, no problem with that.
But alas, some authors are blood purist.
Or is there any other reason why someone should
have powers only because he is from an specific blood line?
Also, if you have only a single brain cell left ask yourself this one question...you have more money than you can spent in 100 lifetimes, your family is at risk, hey wouldn't it be logical to use said money for protection? Like hiring mmmmh a few hundredths
of mercenaries or maybe a bounty of 100 million for Voldy?
What is the purpose giving him endless money and (in most cases) useless skills anyway?
Isn't it much more fun reading about HOW he gained a new skill (and animagi is NOT a skill, as everybody with enough time can do it).
There are good stories around, so why wasting time with this one?
| syft3land 5/19/12 . chapter 13
I like the plot and all, but you should really check what you write, as you tend to shift between present and past tense in the same sentence. While this may not seem important, it can be irritating for some people, and I myself have stopped reading at least one story where this happened too often. Also, remember plural, for instance it's a herd of unicorns, not unicorn. You should also try not to capitalize the first letter when talking about species, but if you do, try to do it with all, meaning you avoid writing Dragons one place, and wolves another, if you can see what I mean. I hope I have been helpfull and that you will at least think about my tips, and again; I love the plot, so don't stop writing.
| deadkid23 5/19/12 . chapter 13
nice very nice 10/10
| Kitsune95 5/19/12 . chapter 13
AWESOME CHAPTERS and story! can't wait for the next update! i love how Harry, while advanced, is /working/ for it! please update soon!