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ievandie
2003-07-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked your story.
Thank you for sharing.
Greetings from Holland.
Catherine5
2003-05-11
ch 1,
abuseWOW! I would very much like to read more of this soon... i hope you're going to write more chapters. I'm hooked!
Kimmers
2003-05-08
ch 1,
abuseLove this it's really good
from Kimmers
maestra
2003-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseBlademistress,
As far as I know, I am the only maestra (Maestra)in the Pretender section. LOL And yes, think I have reviewed every single one of your Pretender stories.
Have to tell you, I like it even better now! BTW, a few typos. If you need a beta, just "e" me. LOL
I always say a fresh pair of eyes on a fic can really eliminate the typos.
Let me know if I can help! - maestra
Sierra Windfire
2003-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseHad to log out to sign this again. I liked what you did with this. Still a really sad ending though. I will read the sequel now...
Bec-Bec
2003-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseI can't send a logged review because I've already submitted one on this chapter. Anyway, it's nice to see that you decided to expand on this story. I enjoyed it quite a bit. The plot was very realistic, there always seems to be more to their phone calls than what meets the eye. Great job! Love Ya!
gemini006007
2003-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseHi Blademistress,

First, I loved your poem. Your story was excellent, but heartwrenching. You did a wonderful job in capturing the emotions of each character. Hope to read some more of your stories.
M.
Strawberige
2003-04-22
ch 1,
abuseHi Blademistress! Oh, Boy, how did I missed that story? after reading this "The End of the Game" became more clear...well, a little bit:-)
But still it is to have a sequel, please:-)
So, no happy endings? Why not?

see your new stories...soon...:-)
maestra
2003-04-15
ch 1,
abuseWell, sorry no flame here. I sort of liked it. Then again, I tend to be a shipper and I tend to like happy endings. Yeah, I am funny that way. LOL
Sierra Windfire
2003-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. Sad and sweet and happy all at the same time. Not many people can pull that off. I especially liked the letter.
Bec-Bec
2002-12-18
ch 1,
abuseI can't believe you ended here! Why haven't you continued this? I really want a sequel!!! Please! I'll beg really I will. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

2002-07-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was sweet. I personally love fluffy stories. They make me happy. So, it's a great story and there is nothing wrong with being fluffy!
MissKate
2002-06-09
ch 1,
abuseShort, but cute! And someday is right!!! It will happen...it just has to! Come on tP movie number 3!!!
ginipig
2002-06-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe poem was awesome. The backstory was actually kinda unnecessary, as the poem told it all.
maestra
2002-06-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseIce Queen, Fluff and fold all you want. It's nice to go to sleep with visions of The Pretender dancing in my head. Makes for happy dreams. Goodnight!
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