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| ievandie 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked your story. Thank you for sharing. Greetings from Holland. |
| Catherine5 2003-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I would very much like to read more of this soon... i hope you're going to write more chapters. I'm hooked! |
| Kimmers 2003-05-08 ch 1, | abuseLove this it's really good from Kimmers |
| maestra 2003-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseBlademistress, As far as I know, I am the only maestra (Maestra)in the Pretender section. LOL And yes, think I have reviewed every single one of your Pretender stories. Have to tell you, I like it even better now! BTW, a few typos. If you need a beta, just "e" me. LOL I always say a fresh pair of eyes on a fic can really eliminate the typos. Let me know if I can help! - maestra |
| Sierra Windfire 2003-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHad to log out to sign this again. I liked what you did with this. Still a really sad ending though. I will read the sequel now... |
| Bec-Bec 2003-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI can't send a logged review because I've already submitted one on this chapter. Anyway, it's nice to see that you decided to expand on this story. I enjoyed it quite a bit. The plot was very realistic, there always seems to be more to their phone calls than what meets the eye. Great job! Love Ya! |
| gemini006007 2003-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi Blademistress, First, I loved your poem. Your story was excellent, but heartwrenching. You did a wonderful job in capturing the emotions of each character. Hope to read some more of your stories. M. |
| Strawberige 2003-04-22 ch 1, | abuseHi Blademistress! Oh, Boy, how did I missed that story? after reading this "The End of the Game" became more clear...well, a little bit:-) But still it is to have a sequel, please:-) So, no happy endings? Why not? see your new stories...soon...:-) |
| maestra 2003-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWell, sorry no flame here. I sort of liked it. Then again, I tend to be a shipper and I tend to like happy endings. Yeah, I am funny that way. LOL |
| Sierra Windfire 2003-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Sad and sweet and happy all at the same time. Not many people can pull that off. I especially liked the letter. |
| Bec-Bec 2002-12-18 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe you ended here! Why haven't you continued this? I really want a sequel!!! Please! I'll beg really I will. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
2002-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was sweet. I personally love fluffy stories. They make me happy. So, it's a great story and there is nothing wrong with being fluffy! |
| MissKate 2002-06-09 ch 1, | abuseShort, but cute! And someday is right!!! It will happen...it just has to! Come on tP movie number 3!!! |
| ginipig 2002-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe poem was awesome. The backstory was actually kinda unnecessary, as the poem told it all. |
| maestra 2002-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseIce Queen, Fluff and fold all you want. It's nice to go to sleep with visions of The Pretender dancing in my head. Makes for happy dreams. Goodnight! |