|Reviews for The Magic Beyond|
| nerd-herd leader 5/30/12 . chapter 1
...Austin does NOT look like Cedric... JUUUUUUST saying ;P
I love it so far. I cant wait to see if you put me in it anywhere (are you still planning on turning my hair a freaky color? :P ) and you suck, my senior, because I will be at camp that whole entire week and the week after so i wont get to read it til later. Could i pesuade you to at least put one more chapter up?
the story flows very well. there were a few parts it got confusing (who is that first section's POV from?[did i miss it or something?] who IS that red head? and some of the flow of convo), but it was overall quite a wonderful first chapter. And i lol-ed when i saw who you made ride with Austin (did you do it because of personality traits? lol).
anyways, MARVELOUS! (and, the whiney part of me must say, when am i going to make my colorful appearance? lol).
| HistoryWizardNerd22 5/15/12 . chapter 1
This is a great story. I would have pictured Pansy as a flute. I, on the other hand, play tenor saxophone.