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| Reviews for Show me heaven |
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   EmmaAugustLover 8/10/12 . chapter 1I loved the movie ! But i didnt read the book. PLZ CONTIUNE |
| The Spectrum Sings 6/29/12 . chapter 1 I like the idea and what you have done with your replacement original characters. There are a few spelling errors and really, you should start a new line for speech. I also think you could improve your description. |
| Slytherinbaby101 5/19/12 . chapter 1 It is really good so far! You only have a few spelling errors and missing punctuation! But I love it so far:) |
