That was really cute! From the teacher drinking her "Juice" right down to the picture. A nice change in story type!

Totally loved this.

I love reading and outsiders pov on a main couple. Hope you do another like this soon

OMG ... this is the cutest story I have read. Jerry is so adorable. The important people in his life. Like father ,like son. MORE... I would love to see what Fitz does with the drawing ;-)

I LOVE THIS! so darn precious and witty. I love the fresh perspective and what it says about these characters that I've already grown to love. I definitely believe you have a gift.

Please continue!

Wooow! This story was amazingly cute! I usually don't even like 1st person POVs, but this definitely changed my opinion. Please keep the amazingness coming! :)

Loved it! The humor in it had me laughing out loud. Love the juice!

Oh my ... this was such a cute first chapter . You totally had me giggling . Kids see and hear everything. I would love it if this was a full blown story. (lots of chapters):) More please ! Loved it !

This was a great fict. It was cute, funny and surely a release from a long day of IB Testing. This just made me think that it would be cool to explore the kid's a bit in season 2.

Ha, love it! Great OC perspective.

Oh Jerry, Jerry, Jerry! Guess people didn't think you were watching them. Our Livi, looks like Fitz is the only Grant man's heart that Livi has. Love it!