so ur a christian like awesome.i love this keep it up.

Awsome! please please please keep going!

Please continue!

...Electrifying! You are a superb writer-never doubt yourself. I can honestly say that this is one of the most intriguing stories on . You can really make "first-person" narrative work, and the correlation between the MBS characters and the actual series was captivating. Lovely, lovely work! I look forward to seeing more of your ideas. )

With much admiration,

-Spark Writer-