Reviews for So This is Life
James Birdsong 6/26/12 . chapter 7
Splendid
James Birdsong 5/24/12 . chapter 6
Nice two chapters _
James Birdsong 5/20/12 . chapter 4
Cool two chapters
James Birdsong 5/17/12 . chapter 2
Excellent
James Birdsong 5/15/12 . chapter 1
It seems an okay first chapter. One big typo though. Please remember there should not be an e in the word sighs. Also more paragraph breaks please. One for each time a different character speaks. Maybe as you did it is a stylistic choice I guess.