| Reviews for So This is Life |
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James Birdsong 6/26/12 . chapter 7Splendid |
James Birdsong 5/24/12 . chapter 6 Nice two chapters _ |
James Birdsong 5/20/12 . chapter 4 Cool two chapters |
James Birdsong 5/17/12 . chapter 2 Excellent |
James Birdsong 5/15/12 . chapter 1 It seems an okay first chapter. One big typo though. Please remember there should not be an e in the word sighs. Also more paragraph breaks please. One for each time a different character speaks. Maybe as you did it is a stylistic choice I guess. |