Wonderful story. *happy fluffy feels*

I left a comment about half an hour ago, but forgot to mention that there was one thing that I missed while reading this story... why didn't Sasha say anything about Payson's book? I mean, it's a huge deal, he should have mentioned it at least once...

I wanted to thank for writing such a wonderful story. There were a few spelling mistakes (for example, you kept writing "a nother" instead of "another" and "loosing" instead of "losing")... however, the story itself was really captivating and interesting. You've managed to capture the characters perfectly and I liked the pace of the plot development. Well-done and thanks!

Loved Payson the Guardian
You should continue with a long fic about their family life and the pregnancy :)

AWWWWWW x1000! That is a great way to tell Sasha that she is pregnant. You should do a series of one shots about Payson and Sasha's children.

Very nice. I really liked your story. Looking forward to reading the epilogue.
Enjoy your holiday,

Regards,
StL

Loved this tic. Soooo amazing. Wish it wasn't over. Cant wait for the epilogue and the next tic. Keep writing.

That was so sweet. But skippig to a month later seemed a little rushed. but it was still cute! As a suggestion for a name, what about Bridget? It means strong in Celtic.

that was great, cant wait to read the epilouge!

I like the idea behind the Olympic tears but would prefer a Payson/sasha pairing

I'd like to read them both, but I'm more interested in Congenital Abnormality of the Heart.

Love! I'm so sad it's done but it was an awesome story! Keep writting!

Oh I am so stupid. Sorry for bothering you but the review I sent before I hadn't even finished the chapter so I hadn't read yet about the appearance of Kaylie Cruz. Sorry for bothering you and great job on the story!

I'm really confused right now. When you say Kelly do you mean Kelly Parker or Kaylie Cruz? Anyways love the story!

I like the idea of number 2 as long as there would be some payson/sasha stuff in there