great story

I love it! Do go on!

Each of these 4 chapters are fantastically well structured.

To me, what you have written has captured the show's style (narration and such) as well as the character's personalities, use of language, and the way in which they interact with other characters.

Sticking to what has already been established from the show strengthens your story. Everybody knows the pier, the CC, Kim's place, Saint's place etc - so your story is easy to visualise.

Really, well done.

I really enjoy the work you've do thus far...but am hanging out for a 'nice' ending.

You have great insight into the story and it is well written. I especially like the dialogue with Sugar. I kiss the show.I thought it was under rated, please continue.