|Reviews for Broken: A Genies and Jinxes Mini Story|
| Bookworm Gal 2/28/13 . chapter 24
A sweet ending to the story. In regards to your question, I'd be satisfied either way. Alaric will be Aladdin's little brother either way and the kid will have Genie no matter what. But feel free to make your own decision. And don't be afraid to enhance and alter the storyline as you see fit for the third movie. There's no reason why you can't mix things up a little. Toss in other villains or challenges if you want. Make Aladdin and Mozenrath half-brother is you think that would be fun. Add a giant whale if you want. Just have fun with it. You have another character in the story already and there's been some different events in their past. There's no reason that it has to be a nearly-identical re-enactment of the third movie. Good luck.
| dream lighting 2/27/13 . chapter 24
It would be a plot twist in the story then Aladdin would be his real brother please do the third movie aladdin and the king of thieves
| Blackmoondragon1415 2/27/13 . chapter 24
To be fair, I think making Cassim Alaric's real father would complicate things needlessly. Also, there are the added implications that he purposefully left both Alaric's and Aladdin's mother, which would push him slightly into a more...jerk of a character role for me [they're two different women, after all, and he was definitely married to Aladdin's mother]. I'd be more willing to accept that Alaric's dad disappeared into the desert never to return again, kinda like Jim Hawkins dad did in Treasure Planet. Then again, you are the writer, so do what thou wilt. :)
And I was wondering if this meant you were done with 'Genies and Jinxes the Series', or will that be added onto as well?
| rollingbell 2/27/13 . chapter 24
Why does everything make me cry ;0;
I loved the ending very sweet i just wish Genie would tell Alric how he feels
but i guess you may do that in the third movie
If Cassim was his real dad that would be interesting for Alaric and Genie because they have that special relationship with each other
Which reminds me I still need to write chapter on magic with everything: Crossing words
| Nasira 2/14/13 . chapter 23
I think Nasira should meet up with Another Sorceress named Maleficent in the next chapter .
| Bookworm Gal 2/12/13 . chapter 23
Yay! Alaric has his memory back, Jafar is gone, and all is right with the world. And they get cake. What could be better than that?
| ILovePeople 2/12/13 . chapter 23
Great! Amazing! I cant wait for the third movie! I think and this is just a thought that just came to mine, if he and Aladdin have the same father D
| dream lighting 2/12/13 . chapter 23
That was close glad every thing back to normal loved it
| Nasira 2/3/13 . chapter 22
I think you should really continue this story it is getting really good so put in the part with Agrabah my friend.
| Jafar 1/28/13 . chapter 22
I think you really continue this wonderful story i like where it's going so keep writing my friend.
| Bookworm Gal 1/28/13 . chapter 22
I loved the little moment between Alaric and Iago. Not to mention the pair getting to play poker with Anubis. That was just amusing. I hope he has a nice nap though and there are no hard feelings when he wakes up. His friends are just trying to help after all. Good luck.
| dream lighting 1/28/13 . chapter 22
Poor Alaric hope he gets is memory back add more soon please
| Jafar 1/23/13 . chapter 21
I think Alaric should get the key and open the pyramid then get the hourglass then take it to Nasira and finally get his memories back.
| Jafar 1/19/13 . chapter 21
I think Alaric should find the key this story is so exciting so please put in more chapters my friend.
| Nasira 1/11/13 . chapter 21
I think this story should be continued it is really getting interestint so far.