Yup after what Greg said that was definitely some revenge lol. Ouchies though it kind of stung me too. More!

all i can say. wow

Ouch, poor Sara. :/
Although I do like it when Greg gets mean, it's something different and you write it so well!

Ouch! Very angry... :)

oooooooooooo Greg... I think I am in love with you when you are so mean!
oh but also, poor Sara. ok, so maybe she deserved it a little but OUCH! what a way to exact revenge! :)

Ahh nooo! I hate it when they fight. They definitely said things they're going to regret...

Sad...I hope in happy ending... :)

First, I feel the need to use your story as a vent for voicing my distaste at FF changing the review thing again .
Secondly, I do love a good fight... this one was funny and yet I can tell it will have serious consequences. Poor Greg has been used and abused and Sara doesn't seem to even have a tiny bit of conscience about it! this will come back to bite her - I can feel it in me bones ;o) xx

Great!

ooooooooo this is exciting! love the line 'They didn't need to fall in love and break each other's hearts- they could blow each other's minds in bed and leave it at that.' :) x

Aww just flawless. The beginning I was reading so quickly because my eyes would carry to the next sentence wanting more lol. Literally I thought ahead to them marrying and having kids :) Just such a beautiful description of Sara to Greg. Lovely!

A great update. Definitely looking forward to finding out where this is gonna go! :)

Sounds sad. :/

But I'll be waiting for more!

Very beautiful so far. Has me wondering where you'll go from here. I'll loom out for it.