Interesting story.

I'm not sure that I agree with your characterization of Akane (apparently ragingly in lust with Dr. Tofu and possibly willing to service the male population of Furinkan... It's the same with Ranma for that matter. I really don't see him as being THAT intractable or dense, and your portrayal of him early on seems to make him just a little stupid for my taste... All in all though ut it's rather amusing.

Are you planning a section to deal with how Akane reacts to being stuck as Ranma? At least she'd have a female body to work with, but how would Genma react? Probably try to engage her to somebody... Her dealings with the Amazons should provide a good deal of comic relief.

Looking forward to it.

this story is the best one of its kind that i have read in a while. thanks for sharing and i am totally elated to read the next chapter. keep up the excellent portayal of characters and development of the cool story.

This story is about the reader looking at Akane and Ranma in a way they never have before. I'm trying to be as true to Akane as the needs of storytelling allow; and I'm trying to not gloss over what living as a girl would be like for Ranma. He always WAS frustrated even being 1/2 a girl. He should start asserting his will; but i will take a little time.

As for the OOC prescription of Dr. Tofu, beginning with Chapter 03, that is addressed in a major plotline.

pretty good.

There's something about this story that puts me on edge. Maybe it's the fact that Dr. Tofu acts not just OOC for Tofu, but OOC for a doctor, coming up with a whacked-out theory for treating "Akane" that doesn't make any sense (and which you quickly pass over), and which basically seems an excuse for mind-control and frustration. Force "Akane" to act in character by post-hypnotic suggestions...? You've lost me right there. I'm willing to swallow quite a lot if a good fanfic author creates the right situation to encourage it, but this plot device comes out of nowhere without justification.

Interesting concept. I'd like to read how it turns out. Please continue.

Ho, this is great. Can't wait for the next installment.

kinda weird but sounds cool, whats gonna happen when the real akane comes?