what the hell was that?...i didnt like it cuz sara would never be so mean and heartless to derek..and nikki would have never done that..no matter how much she hates sara..and derek wouldnt have just explain why he was home late actin like it was nuhin..and chenille..you just screwed up everythin..none of them would have acted like that!

Your story was very interesting. Some of the things said was speaking to my heart my life could be like Sarah but I thank GOD that nothing has happen to me quiet like She has. GOD putsd things in are life For a reason. IF he didn't know that we could handle it he would give it to us. Sorry if I am getting a little to deep. E-mail me at: so we can talk more about this if you have a brother or something that lives in Seattle, Washington tell him to hit me up on the E-mail address to. Holla hope to chat real son! Cause I Am Number 1, 2 isn't a winner, and 3 nobody remembers, cause i am #1(repeat, fades away slower and slower and slower) GONE!1

I really liked the story thanx!

I lov it! I think itìs quite cute!

Just wanted to say: Can I meet your cousins, 'cause, you know, if they really look like Hayden Christensen...

Great job! Jeez I knew Nikki was a bitch but trying to effing drown Sara? That's messed up!Update soon!

this is a good story!

Yepsh, I like it a lot. ;) nice work! I HATE YA, NIKKI

Cool fic plz update soon.

cool...very cool...

sweet write more!

I want more!

didn't nikki tried to kill sara the same way before already?

I LOVED IT WRITE MORE CHAPTERS

that was good!

oh my god great story!

but where did nikki go?i was a little confused bout that,but blimmin great story!