|Reviews for Projects|
| Hope06 6/14/12 . chapter 10
I thought the intereaction was dead on hyper yet serious for deeks dead on love it can't wait to read more
| alix33 6/13/12 . chapter 10
"Here, I got these for you." Opening the bag Callen found a couple of Tootsie Pop Suckers. "Thanks you can never have too many of these." - Are those the ones that Sam used the wrappers to fold birds that swim (since Sam called it a swan and Hetty called it a duck) with in that one season one episode?
"A bed, you want to build a bed?" Deeks got a smirk on his face as he looked at Callen "Does this mean you've got some action lined up there buddy? Because I've heard all about the famous bedroll and how you don't need a bed; so if you're going to build a bed it must mean you've found some hot babe to share it with." Giving an evil smirk "Well I was going to tell you later today but since you brought it up; there's this brunette with the most beautiful eyes and body that will make you cry." He couldn't help the silent chuckle at the look on Deeks face. His head whipped around so fast it was a wonder he didn't break his neck as he stared at Callen in horror. "Are you talking about Kensi? How could it be Kensi, I spend every day with her; I would know if she was seeing someone." There's no way that could be true. Right Callen, it's not true you're just yanking my chain, right?" "We are undercover agents Deeks, we do secret for a living." He decided to continue the torture for a few more minutes. "All those times she didn't answer her phone, she was with me. It's been going on for years, not even Sam knows. Now Hetty she probably knows, after all Hetty knows everything." "Oh, I had no idea you two had something going on. Why didn't she tell me? I'm her partner I thought we shared stuff." Deeks could see it, how she would be attracted to Callen, most women were. This would be why she always turned him down, because she was in love with Callen. Seeing the sad look settle in on Deeks face Callen knew he needed to back off. "Are you really that gullible?" - Gullible Marty was SO funny there.
"I bet you won't think it's so funny than." - "so funny then".
| Bren Gail 6/13/12 . chapter 10
I loved it. Well written, engaging, and entertaining. I loved how Callen threatened to leave Deeks on the side of the road without a cellphone, how Callen had Deeks believing that he and Kensi had something going on, and how Callen wanted to build a BED! I loved it and thought that it was an awesome chapter.
| angelscatie 6/13/12 . chapter 10
Great chapter. I'm liking Callen and Deeks interacting about Callen's projects. Keep up the good work.
| SilverSentinal21 6/13/12 . chapter 10
Oh my dear, dear friend thank you for this! I'm feeling positively wretched today and this gave me a good chuckle. Thank you for taking care of Deeks' constant need for reassurence that he's accepted, in fanfic. Thank you for Callen's diabolically evil teasing, I kept picturing his "I'm going to slit your throat smile" out there witth every word. I love that he's building a bed. I just love all of it.
One tiny thing facial expressions and tone of voice could use a tad more description. I think you were a bit nervous and rushed just a bit. But you had no reason to be nervous, this was wonderful!
| esinger 6/11/12 . chapter 9
Love it. I'm glad Callen and Deeks are doing some bonding time together. Love the chapter and see pu at the next!
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 9
That left Deeks; G hadn't really given a lot of thought to what Deeks did in his spare time except surf and bug Kensi. He had realized a long time ago that he had more in common with the blonde detective than most people knew; Callen had seen the looks of anguish and pain in Deeks eyes that he occasionally saw looking back at him in the mirror. He knew the happy go lucky, always ready with a joke persona that Deeks showed to the world was just a front.
When Deeks first came to work with NCIS Callen had been skeptical about his abilities but had come to realize in a short time that Marty Deeks was an excellent undercover agent. He could slide into an alias almost as well as Callen did himself. He had also proved to be an excellent partner for Kensi; always having her back, willing to sacrifice his own wellbeing to protect the brunette from danger.
oh my God so accurate!
and road trip i love it but i think callen may just regret it a bit!
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 8
awww what a gift from hetty
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 7
loved the team's reaction but I laughed so loud at gibbs' text his witty humour indeed
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 6
i loved renko in this
What rumor would that be? The one about our resident lovebirds who deny they have a thing or the one Hetty ripping a piece off Sam for getting her Jag shot?" He twisted off the beer cap and put his gun back on the kitchen counter. "That's about as much gossip as we have going on these days."
and this made me laugh
now which coupple would this be there is two in canon
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 5
I squeelled at the love in this chapter, the respect for Gibbs is wow
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 4
"An old friend gave it to me a long time ago; said one day I would need it that a real man needed to know how to fix things. He taught me how to use most of the tools in it.' He smiled at the memory of the faded blue eyes teaching him how to sand and varnish a piece of wood, how to hammer a straight nail and use a wrench. "It was one of the first things I put in the storage unit."
"That has to be Gibbs, right?" Getting an affirmative nod he kept on
loved this i so thought like Sam
very well done with both you reall showed just how much sam knows his partner how much to push etc.
and hmm does hetty know about the locker i would think she would
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 3
wow this chapter absolutly amazing
| Hope06 6/9/12 . chapter 2
loved this and you really got callen's inner voice
| alix33 6/8/12 . chapter 9
The salvage yards and reclaimed wood is IMO a cool idea.