Great job with the interaction between Lupo and Bernard-it was like watching the show again! I sure miss that show! Curious as to what the victim might say. The two brothers twist was clever.

You can do another happy dance because here I am with a nice review! I like how you have written Lupo and Bernard, they are pretty much spot on. The evidence found in the car looked too obvious, I think it was planted there, but I guess I will just have to wait and see! Keep up the good work and hope you are enjoying your vacay!

Hi! Being a writer myself, I know how happy a review can make me, so here I am for you! Your story so far is great. Looking forward to see how it develops! Keep writing!

Wow! Very intriguing and very in character... I'm impressed! I'm looking forward to chapter 2 :)