|Reviews for Pinpoint Conviction|
| GeminiZKnight 4/20/13 . chapter 25
Total epicness! Kaede, Elrya, Garder, and everyone else versus the whack-job goddess! Can't wait to see how this ends. Also, poor Carentorzulan :(
| HayashiOkami 4/4/13 . chapter 24
Just to say, I have been reading this. xD Just haven't reviewed. I really like the potential in reviving Cents and this version of him just seems less...crazy. If that's at all possible with him.
I am thinking an entire rewrite of my EL story, So, the Cicadas Return and hopefully this time I won't hit a brick wall with the plot. I wanted to ask whether I should replace So, the Cicadas Return chapters or make a new story? The plot is pretty different, after all...
anyways, I can't wait to see what happens next with all this crazy stuff going on. Glad to see Garder can still hold up against Diclonius opponents, even one like the pure voice character.
| HayashiOkami 3/11/13 . chapter 23
Awesome developments. This situation between the Voice diclonius and Kakuzawa #2 reminds me of what Julius did in Lifeline...
and Garder continues to be a powerhouse even blind. :) Or maybe that's actually helping now? No extra stimuli to bother with like sight. And the Voice's powers are pretty neat, too.
| DarkChiyo 3/2/13 . chapter 23
Too lazy to log in right now. xD
A great fight between Garder and Onyara. The special abilities are interesting. I hope Lucy will do some difference in the fight.
But I guess in the end it will be Elyra who must do the ass-kicking again xD.
Looking forward to the next chapter
| Dreachon 3/2/13 . chapter 23
Ha finally somebody shows up to make Aurelius shut up, the guy sounds more like one of those old records that just keeps going on and on. Great job.
You can rely on Garder to put people back in their place though now it seems that Kaede is going to cause trouble... again.
| windows98 2/25/13 . chapter 10
Great make more.
| GeminiZKnight 2/9/13 . chapter 22
I love this series so far!
Unfortunately, I can't say I'm a huge fan of how much you bash Kaede. It might just be because she's my 2nd favorite character, but I think you should give her a little more credit. She's gone through the exact same things as Elrya, and it could be considered worse, when you consider how much everything she loses means to her.
Also, if I could make a suggestion, do you think you could create a small subplot for Nana? I don't think she gets the screen-time she deserves, and she hasn't gotten much extra character development compared to the other canon characters. Again, it might just be me picking favorites, Nana being my number 1 favorite character, but I think it would be a good idea.
Keep up the good work!
| Anthony 1/28/13 . chapter 22
Fantastic chapter good sir. this Pure Voice Diclonius is a novel idea and will hopefully herald some truly epic battles. i hope she has some disgraceful levels of power too, maybe something different from standard diclonius like you did with Julius.
Even though a lot of people hate it when a character dies and is then brought back, to hell with expectation, i think it works well with Vlad.. and maybe, just maybe, you paved the way for 'other' characters to be brought back as well.. :P
For god sake give poor old Synth his other arm back :'). i would love to see his bullet powers see a bit of an upgrade too. the story needs a powerful male and his character is one of the most vibrant and interesting. second to him would have been Orlana... :(
Looking forward to your next chapter. i think i speak for the rest of your readers when i say its a sad day when Conviction comes to a close, because something tells me this story will be the last we'll see of Elrya and the gang. so please, take your time :D
| DarkChiyo 1/3/13 . chapter 21
They should shoot the guy right now, right here. Elyra will have a wonderful time with him, I guess. At last the two Diclonius survived
| Anthony 12/29/12 . chapter 21
I have followed your stories since Pinpoint Lifeline, and its been highly enjoyable. I started reading Pinpoint Lifeline, read through to chapter 70, at which point I had to wait for you to bring out the next chapter, checking up every week for an update. Same goes with Pinpoint Zero and Conviction.
Don't neglect the original cast members (Elrya, Miriana etc), Lucy's transformation from a bad-ass lone wolf to this needy, emotional, babysitter seemed far-fetched and awfully sudden, and people who have interacted with Lucys character frequently end up downplaying her past and making light of it, which in turn degrades the entire basis of Elfen Lied.
All in all, a great and involving story that I have enjoyed following for the past year or so, and what a show of commitment. I've recommended your trilogy to my friends. Happy Holidays!
| HayashiOkami 11/17/12 . chapter 20
Did NOT expect that. I'm looking forward to seeing what Cents will add to the equation, though.
| HayashiOkami 11/16/12 . chapter 19
Wow, loved this chapter. We're finally getting to know what's up with that cult.
Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I've been busy.
| DarkChiyo 11/13/12 . chapter 19
Now the Jerk gonna get it. :D
Lets see if the man survives this little "battle"
Im more worried about Liliana and Elyra. :/
| DarkChiyo 11/11/12 . chapter 18
Poor Miriana. Everything is crashing down on her. I do hope shell make it in time. The Chapter is well written as usual with some minor grammar mistakes.
I stay tuned for the next Chapter. Hopefully Elrya is fine, wherever she is.
| DarkChiyo 10/17/12 . chapter 17
A great chapter
I just want to point out some strange line from Miriana:
...Miriana explained, clearly feeling relieved that the people she knew -were- sex-crazed hedonist who had to get it done mere hours after going on their date...
I think you wanted to write that shes glad that they werent. Otherwise it would sound strange _
There were few missing words and letters but otherwise a well written chapter.
Looking forward for the next one :)