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| Reviews for The Story Of Kayla Watershard |
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  Guest 12/16/12 . chapter 13 other wizards can learn kraken i used to be a balnce [dont play the game anymore cause my laptop broke :[ and i was able to learn it |
| Guest 12/16/12 . chapter 9 lol McRonalds |
| Snow 12/15/12 . chapter 16 Soooo Kayla is princess Bluebell? ( You do not have to read this part and its a little odd... Dont say i didnt warn you :P) And can Jade be a servant? please? i know its a servant i shouldn't want her in so badly But if i can make a good enough character for stories of good writers it means i can make myown to that are good |
| Snow 12/15/12 . chapter 1 i spelled Conceteration wrong o.o |
| Snow 12/12/12 . chapter 7 hmm servant? uh i am making this up now i understand if you turn her away Name: Jade Shade storm Age: 13 School:Storm ( was pulled out of school to be Servant ( is that ok?)) Appearance: 5'3. Long Curly Brown hair with Dark Carmel Tips. Brown eyes with a tint of hazel eyes. Not light skinned bu not tan. Average sized lips. Personality: Serious, Caring, Will always put others before her, Once you get to know her shes Funny and Sweet. Background: lived in orphanage till age 5 ran away running from place to place running from life as it seems. Does not want to find out her parents thinking they abandoned her. does not talk about past much ( is it to much? take it into concentration... I know its late :P) Thanks for reading :D |
| Snow 12/12/12 . chapter 6 hmmmm if i make a servant or bodyguard could she still be a wizard? |
| Snow 12/12/12 . chapter 5 i finished the first book with-in about... 1 and a quarter days? it toke me a year to decide to read the second and i barley read mocking jay as I'm sad to finish the trilogy |
| Snow 12/12/12 . chapter 3 Are we allowed to add characters? well i'll check teh rest of teh chapters to see |
| Snow 12/12/12 . chapter 1 I love this game and tnhe story keep up the work! |
 LotsOfLovin 12/10/12 . chapter 4Ok i like it but the story needs some things: - more details - little more work - LESS speed; the story is goin way to fast( from thing to another at a quite fast pace; no good) -but then ya i like it. Nice job |
| NightSkyWolves 12/9/12 . chapter 16 XD When I glanced at the chapter title, I thought of my little sis, Sierra. Whenever we role play or I wrote a story, she rules Zafaria and I rule Avalon. XD |
| yin-yang girl12 12/9/12 . chapter 16 Omg you finally updated woohoo plus it was 2 days after my b-day so double woohoo omg that was like a cliff hanger sorta plz plz plz Plz Plzplz plz plz plz plz update |
| RupeeOfMadness 12/9/12 . chapter 16 Kissy kissy? :D |
| LostTriHunter 12/9/12 . chapter 1 Nice start |
| Eve Dragono 11/6/12 . chapter 15 O_O I did NOT see that coming |
