Um, I hate to be mean and **, but this story isnt very good. It needs editing badly. Do you not see the ugly "* * * *
" everywhere?

Subaru and Seishiro are pretty OOC, and um...the Tree, if it actually exists, is NOT sentient. Where do people keep getting the idea that Seishiro is following the orders of some sentient and bitchy female tree spirit? It's NOT the case.

I'm sorry, but I cant read any more. XD

I'm glad that Subaru and Seishiro finally be together. And with a help from the Tree and Hokuto. But I just couldn't think what would happen next. Because after all Subaru was still a Dragon of Heaven and Seishiro was a Dragron of Earth. Beside what would Kamui react if he knows Subaru with Seishiro now? I mean, Kamui really loves Subaru. Please post the next chapter quickly! Oh, by the way, the Tree forgot to tell Naomi that Subaru only had one eye too. ^_^

Weeeeeeeeeeeeee!! I love this story.....though the characters are alittle OOC. But who cares when there is S/S cuteness involved!!! Please get up the next chapter!!

So Setsuka killed her daughter to made Seishiro killed him and became the Sakurazukamori. Poor Seishiro. So he must went the same things like Subaru. But what would the tree mean by talking about her? And I think Hokuto appeared would just made Subaru couldn't let her go. Please post the next chapter quickly! And I still wait for the chapter seven of The Twins!

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! This is wonderful! I really like the tree's personality and how Seishirou reacted to having his link to Subaru cut. PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP!

I really liked this. ^^ I -love- badass Subarufics... they make me happy. XD Seishirou seems a bit out of character though... -too- ready to act on his emotions.

Oh. Loved your personification of the Sakura. ^^ (Always knew that blasted tree was a girl. :3)

Can't wait for chaptaa three ^^ Please keep going with this, it's interesting! (Also, something weird happened with your html formatting~!)

O_O I LOVE this fic!!!! It's so original... I want more Subaru badass action; please get the next chapter soon!!!