|Reviews for The Great Journey|
| praeceps 3/24/13 . chapter 14
in your re write dont make ta[i such a chi[dish bitch she was nothing [ike that and its is very irritating to see it [ike that
| Chronus1326 1/12/13 . chapter 8
This was a good chapter. I do wonder tho, the humans, Hackett included, what color hat do they wear, metaphorically, black or white, or is this your reincarnation of Cerebus? Not anti alien, just completely pro-human?
| Chronus1326 1/11/13 . chapter 6
" I'm sorry if you were expecting an epic showdown between the UNSC and the Turians, but that's been done hundreds of times. I wanted to do something a little more original with the first contact."
It was real good, I like it. Did make the humans seem very treacherous right from the start, much like the Sangheili think of us...
| Chronus1326 1/10/13 . chapter 20
Hmmm, well, I've just started reading, saw a chapter named 'rewrite announcement' and read it. So either I'll be able to review as I go, or I'll suddenly find a brand new story posted! I hope the re-write is going well, I wish you luck.
| Nevec 1/8/13 . chapter 20
Well good luck with redoing everything bet it's going to be a pain in the ass.
| Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 20
I like the story overall. I personally think you written tali a little wrong. On a side sde in my opinion you made shepard a little to much renagade.
| Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 6
Dude WHY THE FUCK IS EVERYTHING BASED OFF OF FUCKING COVIE TECH YOU HAVE TAKEN A VERY GOOD FANFIC IDEA AND RAN IT STRAIT INTO THE GROUND BY GIVING THE HUMANS A BUNCH OF COVIE WEAPONS AND ALMOST NONE OF THEIR OWN. If you want to make them a powerhouse use railgun and forerunner hardlight tech instead of using powerful but crude and flawed covie tech. I was really getting into your story until I noticed that the only actual human weapon that you had given the humans was the relatively outdated M6D, now I just cant keep reading anymore.
| shadownartuo666 1/8/13 . chapter 20
your story was good but if you feel this a frist draft i cant wait for the finshed story
keep up the good work and good luck
| Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 4
I dont mean to be a flamer but I just read chapter 4 and I feel the need to point out the fact that the standard MJOLNIR GEN 2 helmet does not have a slit for the visor if thats what your going for then I think the one that Demarko from fireteam majestic uses is more what your describing.
| Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 2
Dude why the FUCK is everything PLASMA based? I don't care how far they have advanced thats covie tech NOT human tech, it just feels wrong.
| Guest 1/7/13 . chapter 20
I pity you man, I mean, that's almost 200,000 words to re-write. This is probably going to be a long wait...
| UltraMickey 1/7/13 . chapter 20
Re-write everything? Might as well make a Beta reader read everything, fix the mistakes and post it online. This will take a lot of time, ya know.
| TheBleachDoctor 12/29/12 . chapter 19
I love the premise of this. It is amazing.
| Guest 12/19/12 . chapter 8
Halo rings do not destroy a galaxy they destroy every sentient life form within the galaxy starving the flood
| UltraMickey 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Awesome Story! Keep it up!