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| Reviews for All Hail Kia Queen of the World |
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  J 6/9/13 . chapter 6 I like the way you launched into the story quickly without much preamble and i love kia's modern day god references (Ninja turtle and Avengers) However i think that you should describe each god more and interweave some mythology into your stories. Furthermore there are too many characters and its hard to have a good character development with too many characters. Your plot is weak on occasion, like how she would randomly get in the car with some unknown guy. It is too unrealistic and the whole purest of humans thing is a little cliche. Other than that it is a reverting story and can't wait to see what is next! |
 AyCarayChicolion 5/26/13 . chapter 6I really enjoy reading your story! Its so entertaining and damn that will be horrible if everyone can read your thoughts out loud, ugh do not want to even think about it, lol |
| Crista 5/7/13 . chapter 1 Please write more its so good so far please |
| mackenziejen 4/27/13 . chapter 5 oh update soon |
| Mmbkc 11/7/12 . chapter 4 Ohh please do more soon |
| Wolfqueen6 10/23/12 . chapter 3 Please make a next chapter! I loves it :) |
| Amanda-Marie04 10/23/12 . chapter 3 I'm really intrigued, this is a really great story you have. Update soon please! I really like it :) -Amanda |
| Lavu Topaz 10/18/12 . chapter 2 Hope I'm not hurting anybody by saying this but most people choose Anubis to ship there characters in story's I mean I like Anubis too but maybe people be create and choose someone else? Sorry but its true but if you wanna choose Anubis that's fine by me oh yeaI choose Horus/Kia because I like Horus better :P Keep up the great work XD |
| Delusional-Jackal 10/9/12 . chapter 3 I really like your story so far! It has a good plot line and is very interesting. The only thing I don't like is the grammatical and spelling errors. I'm not trying to sound mean or anything but the errors did confuse me a bit at times. I know some people really struggle with spelling and grammar for various reasons and you may proofread your work but if you could be a bit more thorough that would help. It doesn't have to be perfect just a little bit of revising would be nice. If you need any help with revisions I would be glad to help. Just pm me and let me know. But other than that do keep updating. Your story has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work! _ |
| blazikenXlucario 9/30/12 . chapter 3 I like it, very interesting. Kairi . |
| Mademoiselle le Chat Cosplay 9/24/12 . chapter 2 i like it please continue |
| Guest 9/12/12 . chapter 2 Anubis/Kia plz! Anubis is my fave! |
| Guest 9/12/12 . chapter 1 This is reallly good! But u got one little part wrong... Anubis and Horus are half brothers... Not cousins. |
| binabella 9/9/12 . chapter 2 I really like your story. Please update soon again! I would like Anubis/Kia |
| AnonymousYouth 8/28/12 . chapter 2 Anubis/Kia FOREVER! UPDATE! I AM LOVING THIS! |
