Reviews for The Promise
krissykitty411 5/11/13 . chapter 11
this is hilarious! I love how you kept the personality of the characters! please update soon cant wait to see what happens!
DirectionOnForever 1/31/13 . chapter 11
Feed me more chapters!... Sorry... I can't control myself when I read an awesome fanfic... Again, I apologize...
Meghan 1/11/13 . chapter 11
Dor-15... NOOO! SHE'S GOING TO CORRUPT SARAH'S MIND! ERMAGERD!
Redsparrow3 8/20/12 . chapter 11
You write Wilbur really well with his childish personality! It's amazing :)
Oo oh! Doris! Things just got serious dun dun duuuun!
:)
Sincerely, Redsparrow3
ellie111lee 7/28/12 . chapter 10
WOOOOOOOH! I love this story so much!
Redsparrow3 7/16/12 . chapter 10
Naw poor Anna
I like how you wrote that so you thought he had just confessed he loved Anna and moments later we found out he hadn't (yet!)
Great chapter
Sincerely, Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 7/9/12 . chapter 9
Okey dokey :)
Won't leave!
Yay im a kitten haha
Meow
Sincerely, Redsparrow3
Wait I'm a bird and a cat...
Redsparrow3 6/27/12 . chapter 8
You are really good at keeping everyone in character :)

I'm also excited as to what's going to happen next

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
VCAyuki 6/26/12 . chapter 8
Oh no :( hope anna and wilbur sort things out soon! nice plot
VCAyuki 6/24/12 . chapter 7
I can't wait for them to get married x3 nice work
ErinRosetheWriter 6/18/12 . chapter 7
This is a great fic! Very realistic, sticking pretty close to character, very good! :) please update!
Mrs. Frodo Baggins 6/17/12 . chapter 7
A FEW grammar mistakes here and there... but hey? Who doesn't? Keep at this story!
Redsparrow3 6/17/12 . chapter 7
Interesting! Anna is getting jealous, I found Wilbur's reaction to Sarah funny XD

Awesome

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 6/10/12 . chapter 6
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

In this part you really captured everyone's personality:

"Oh," Lewis smiled and ran his fingers though his blond hair. "Thanks."

Wilbur groaned loudly. "Boring!" He grabbed Anna's hand and pulled her towards the door. "Come on Anna lets go do something that is actually fun."

He froze and turned around to Lewis. "Hey, don't tell mom ok."

It was awesome :)

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 6/6/12 . chapter 5
Happy Birthday :)

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
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