| Reviews for The Promise |
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krissykitty411 5/11/13 . chapter 11this is hilarious! I love how you kept the personality of the characters! please update soon cant wait to see what happens! |
DirectionOnForever 1/31/13 . chapter 11Feed me more chapters!... Sorry... I can't control myself when I read an awesome fanfic... Again, I apologize... |
Meghan 1/11/13 . chapter 11 Dor-15... NOOO! SHE'S GOING TO CORRUPT SARAH'S MIND! ERMAGERD! |
Redsparrow3 8/20/12 . chapter 11You write Wilbur really well with his childish personality! It's amazing :) Oo oh! Doris! Things just got serious dun dun duuuun! :) Sincerely, Redsparrow3 |
ellie111lee 7/28/12 . chapter 10WOOOOOOOH! I love this story so much! |
Redsparrow3 7/16/12 . chapter 10Naw poor Anna I like how you wrote that so you thought he had just confessed he loved Anna and moments later we found out he hadn't (yet!) Great chapter Sincerely, Redsparrow3 |
Redsparrow3 7/9/12 . chapter 9Okey dokey :) Won't leave! Yay im a kitten haha Meow Sincerely, Redsparrow3 Wait I'm a bird and a cat... |
Redsparrow3 6/27/12 . chapter 8You are really good at keeping everyone in character :) I'm also excited as to what's going to happen next Sincerely, Redsparrow3 |
VCAyuki 6/26/12 . chapter 8Oh no :( hope anna and wilbur sort things out soon! nice plot |
VCAyuki 6/24/12 . chapter 7I can't wait for them to get married x3 nice work |
ErinRosetheWriter 6/18/12 . chapter 7This is a great fic! Very realistic, sticking pretty close to character, very good! :) please update! |
Mrs. Frodo Baggins 6/17/12 . chapter 7A FEW grammar mistakes here and there... but hey? Who doesn't? Keep at this story! |
Redsparrow3 6/17/12 . chapter 7Interesting! Anna is getting jealous, I found Wilbur's reaction to Sarah funny XD Awesome Sincerely, Redsparrow3 |
Redsparrow3 6/10/12 . chapter 6HAPPY BIRTHDAY! In this part you really captured everyone's personality: "Oh," Lewis smiled and ran his fingers though his blond hair. "Thanks." Wilbur groaned loudly. "Boring!" He grabbed Anna's hand and pulled her towards the door. "Come on Anna lets go do something that is actually fun." He froze and turned around to Lewis. "Hey, don't tell mom ok." It was awesome :) Sincerely, Redsparrow3 |
Redsparrow3 6/6/12 . chapter 5Happy Birthday :) Sincerely, Redsparrow3 |