|Reviews for Le Enfant d'Arthur|
| vickycash 10/24/12 . chapter 1
i love your story )
| mermaid princess lilian 10/13/12 . chapter 1
Ok, this is the funniest fiction I've ever read. While reading I worry that I might turn into a hyena
| Get-Outta-My-Head 9/20/12 . chapter 1
LOL! Miles is so freakin hilarious! And the ending (last sentence)... priceless! I loved it! Good job there
| hogwartswonderland 8/20/12 . chapter 1
Cute. I thought she would name him Arthur :)
| SibunaMe 8/20/12 . chapter 1
That was funny-sweet-and overall good. :)
| Whisper and Friends 7/18/12 . chapter 1
I love it it was funny. I like how she was yelling at Miles, of course i havent seen the movie in like a year or two so i had to remember Miles first.
| BellaMarieSwanCullen97 7/8/12 . chapter 1
| Starsinger 7/4/12 . chapter 1
Very funny, very much a lift for a VERY BAD DAY. Thank you.
| sibuna9932 6/20/12 . chapter 1
| xxDeadInsidexx 6/1/12 . chapter 1
| WriterFreak101 5/28/12 . chapter 1
Interesting. I haven't read the book, the movie was ok-ish. Though I still think it's bizarre with that whole Ali being Arthur thing. It doesn't make any sense. I liked it better when Will was suppose to be Arthur. That made sense.
Yeah. Complaints about movie aside, I still think this fic was pretty good. Thought it was funny in spots. Especially the "Anything but Arthur" part. I chuckled a lot. :)
The title of this story is French right? Translates into "The Child of Arthur." I love French! I've been taking it for three years. Which is why I kind of can't help but point out this one grammatical French mistake. "Le" is the masculine form of the French word that translates into "the" in English. If the next word begins with a consonant, then you would keep the "e" in "Le" there. However, the word that follows "Le" in this sentence begins with a vowel. The French don't like it when they run vowels together like this. So what they do is clip the vowel letter from the first word, and join the two.
So instead of the sentence looking like this:
Le Enfant d'Arthur
The sentence looks like this:
You were pretty close. And I smiled when you did it with the "de" and Arthur. Just need to fix the "Le Enfant" and it would be perfect. :)
Again though, the fic was good. Sorry for the grammar lesson. .
| Spiffswishy 5/19/12 . chapter 1
I actually HATED the Avalon High movie. Simple because it totally screwed Cabot's book into an entirely different story. Nevertheless this is a hilarious fanfic and I have to say it was really enjoyable. Great job!
| merylx 5/19/12 . chapter 1
Absolutely loved it! The bit with Miles at the end was hilarious! :)I hope you keep writing for this fandom because there are not enough people in it. Keep writing! merylx