Ahhhh! Great story! This is my first Loki /oc fic and it is fantastic! Ohh, Loki is the best! Great character and development, I loved it!

IIII SSSAAAAAYYYYY MMMMAAAKKEE SSEEEQQUUEEEELLL!

U r officially the only fuckin person in the universe that is the most like me.!.!.! Just I make a little less grammer mistakes. ;D XD

Amazing!

It's great so far but PLEASE don't turn it into Twilight!;}

I am really loving this story so far! I have been thinking about writing my own, but i never get the time. This is exactly the way i would of written it!:D:P great job!

My gods you are evil. You had me so hooked on this story that I stayed up until four in the morning trying to finish it. Really. You are a very skilled author and I'll be sure to check out some more of your work, but for now I believe that there is a sequel to be read.

Oh my God, if it wasn't for my boyfriend sitting next to me i would be fuckin balling my eyes out. This was beautiful and very well written. Everyone was in perfect character. You did a fantastic job on this and i am very happy there is a sequal!

Awww 3

Hate to be the nit-picky grammar police, but you are constantly using "than" when you should be using "then." And, since the word is used so very often, I can't just ignore it and move on. It's throwing me off, and I'd really like to just be able to read the story.

I'm really not intending to be harsh, just trying to convey that a mistake repeated sentence following sentence, paragraph following paragraph is just too frustrating to continue reading the story. I was forced to stop eight paragraphs in.

You should do an epilogue. About Loki and Alex getting married and having little Loki and Alex jrs. :3
Anyway, I loved the story. You are a fantabulous author, and I will be looking forward to more stories.
P.S. I think you should make a story about Captain America and that women who he saved that was on the news in the movie. You know, she worked for that cafe if you watched the deleted scenes on the movie.
P.P.S. Did I mention that I loved this story?

You SHOULD feel evil... *mumbles about how you made me cry again*

GOD DAMMIT! Why do your stories have such a effect on me? I have cried TWICE because of your story. TWICE!
Well, I'm not saying I hate it... :3

I'm sorry about what's happening in your life. It must be really hard. But, I'm one of those people who won't pester people to do stuff. So take you time whenever something like this comes up. :)

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