|Reviews for Punctuated Equilibrium|
| The Lonely Fox 12/19/12 . chapter 2
I know it's been a couple months but I really hope that you find some time to continue this story as its a great fic with a awesome premise. I hope you update soon
| IReallyEnjoyBeingOnThisSite 12/15/12 . chapter 2
Will you be continuing this story or was chapter 2 the end!
| Delaney 10/14/12 . chapter 2
This is amazing. Honestly it's like reading a published sci-fi novel. I can see how much work you put into this and I will be following it eagerly.
| klotze 10/8/12 . chapter 2
Hurry up and write! ;-)
| klotze 10/8/12 . chapter 1
This is great. You really nailed the characters. Great choice of perspective as well. Not a single bad choice in this chapter. Love it...
| novasupernova 10/8/12 . chapter 1
Brilliant! Love it!
| DevilinaCardigan 9/12/12 . chapter 2
Pandorum is such a good movie and I'm so glad you decided to start writing it even though the fandom is pretty much non existent. I absolutely love how you're writing these two and I can't wait to see where you're taking us.
| lilbobcatgrl88 8/5/12 . chapter 2
love it :)! good job
| Guest 8/3/12 . chapter 2
Fantastic fic so far, I am loving it! Gallo was actually from flight crew four, though
| JustAGirlsCuz 7/29/12 . chapter 1
Love it! Please keep writing, hardly every see any fir this fanbase
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 2
OK Nadia redeemed herself on this one, serously, what she did was very brave, defending him that way when he was in trouble, and what is wrong with that people anyway? It's not as if they are responsible for what happened on the ship, they are victims as well, they're fortunate to be alive. And they should be grateful. Also, what is wrong with that Sergeant Wilkes? What Nadia and Bowere do, is of not concern to him. They don't have to report him the status of their relationship. H has this superior attitude like he wants to pronounced himself the king of the rock. I sort of dislike him in this chapter, you know. Anyhow, enough of this gushing. Thanks for updating, you are brilliant! I hope you will update ASAP. Have an awesome rest of the week and the most fruitful imagination.
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 2
Thanks so much for taking the time to write this. You are an excellent writer. Please continue to create this new chapter for us. Bravo!
| Daitanro 6/20/12 . chapter 2
Really really good writing.
I agree with Sycomore. This should be the official story of Pandorum sequel. It almost is for me.
It doesn't seem we will have a sequel any time soon, anyway. I think we can consider it official if we want, can't we? ;)
I enjoyed specially Nadia's speech. It's like she, trying to make the survivors understand their real situation and inspiring them hope, is comprehending it herself. Like if her words were inner thoughts spoken out loud.
So, and much to my regret, I have to defend Wilkes. Yes, he's a total jerk, but in the end I think he was right and it was better to tell the people the whole truth.
I found very interesting the emotional bond Nadia and Bower share. They know each other only for 36 hours, but the others are the strangers. They need each other so much. Nadia is Bower's sanity, some how. If he wouldn't care so much about her maybe Bower wouldn't have been able to get rid of Pandorum. And although it will take him awhile, Bower is the only one who can take Nadia out of her stronghold of distrust.
Complex and touching relationship, which you are developing beautifully.
And of course, the subtle glimpses of atraction between them are delicious.
Please, please, keep going. I enjoying very much this story.
And please, please, update soon! I am very impatient to read what's going to happen next. And I'm sure I'm not the only one.
PS: Are you going to pick a first name for Bower? I vote for Chris or Hal. :)
| Sycomore 6/16/12 . chapter 2
I was so excited to find a new chapter! I enjoyed it SO much! It's really well-written, this should be the official story/script/novel of Pandorum sequel! :p
I liked the fact that you think about details and every possibilities. When I was reading I was like "oh i've never thought about this, but it's a great idea". I also really liked the realism of the crowd's reaction when Bower and Nadia tell them the earth is gone.
I think I'll be terrified if I was on Tanis, and really pessimistic about my chance of survival. They know nearly nothing about this planet, if they can find food or any resources, and they have nothing to build shelter, grow plants, or make anything. So i'm curious about the part when they'll have to go back into the Elysium And of course loved the slow evolution of Bower and Nadia relationship :p
Thank you for your hard work!
| evershort 6/15/12 . chapter 2
:D Yeah. Most definitely worth the read. Sometimes the longer chapters are like "Ohhh my gosh, I love it but just END already!" Yours is like... "I love it, don't end yet!".
I really like that Nadia took charge on the speech thing. I don't have a doubt that Bower could have handled it, actually I expected her to be challenged while he spoke fluidly, but I just like that she managed it. They're both really insightful, I think.
Ugh. Of course, the higher ups are jerks though. I mean, I'm more than likely biased on this, but I feel like all the stuff that Nadia was in charge of is kinda super important. Yeah, people need to know things, so that's fine. But like... everything they needed to survive is still on that ship. Kinda important.
Men. Men in charge, at that.
Anyway. Great job! :D Positive feedback, just like I thought it'd be, haha. Sorry if I ever repeat things from previous reviews though. I'm sure I did when I mentioned chapter length... my bad. But still! Awesome.