| Reviews for Until You Believe |
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Guest 4/19/13 . chapter 14 Please give us more? |
Jessa 4/2/13 . chapter 14 Any new chapters...? |
isadomi 3/18/13 . chapter 14 Nice story I can't wait for the next update |
Guest 3/16/13 . chapter 14 Great chapter! I love your writing. So glad to see you back! |
Guest 3/15/13 . chapter 14 Very happy to see this story updated! Loved this last chapter! Can't wait to see how Jordan & Angela enjoy their night together! |
Jody Barsch 3/16/13 . chapter 14Glad to see an update :) I really liked the choice to move past the fight at the start and just recap. Definitely wanted more, but liked how the last line ended. Also liked the "Who?" I questioned playfully. "You?" bit. |
Knotty Ink 3/16/13 . chapter 1Absolutely love this story. Please keep going. |
moriahhh 3/15/13 . chapter 14Great chapter! Love getting the update:) |
3girlsmom 3/15/13 . chapter 14You are going to END this chapter like THAT!? askajfdidjfoiajeklkcmadoksja oife! When will you update this again!? Oh My favorite! Angela and Jordan forever! Love the chemistry between them, the innocence, the whole thing! Love you Mary! Thanks for Updating! |
TheOnceAnonymous14 3/15/13 . chapter 14Wow, it's been awhile! :) Very nice update! Jordan and his sibling interaction is sweet. I can't wait to see what happens between him and Angela! ;) |
Jody Barsch 9/19/12 . chapter 13Best one yet, really well written. (Hope Angela doesn't get too mad.) Some great lines: "She was seeking her own form of release, even if she didn't know it. A release that I was more than willing to give her if she'd just let me..." "Ever since that day, the day she went home with me, we'd pushed her boundaries. ... Together, we tested her limits." "wishing I could remove this barrier between us and lose myself in her" "As much as I wanted to push her limits, I didn't want to push her away." |
mlb388 9/18/12 . chapter 13Poor Jordan - he's making progress and then he forgets the dance. I hope she doesn't rip into him too much but I'm sure she's upset. She had to be really excited about going to the dance with him. |
moriahhh 9/17/12 . chapter 13LOVED IT! Glad to see you back:) |
TheOnceAnonymous14 9/17/12 . chapter 13Wow I looked at this story this morning and came home happy to see an update! :) Things are amazing on this story! Update soon! :) |
3girlsmom 9/17/12 . chapter 13Thank you that was perfect. Jordan and Angela are still MY favorite. Team Angela! LOL! |