very nice story. like the crossover with the involvement of Steve in it. and the whole team travelling to Hawaii to get Nell back.
one small suggestion if i may: maybe it's better to use more punctuations. that makes reading a little more easy.
but nice story so far

Oh please continue this a serious kick-ass story.
xo

That's awesome really good stuff

There were parts that were confusing because of poor use of punctuation. Other than that ie is pretty good.

I like the cross over too.

Thanks for writing it.

I like it. The crossover episode wit a twist, PLUS Steve us there! :) keep going!