I wish Derek had been there. I like your version of the story much better.

Awwww! This is sooo sweet :3

Can you make another story of reids first day at the bau, and how he wonders what ever happened to Morgan since they lost contact. And his reaction when he remembers Morgan, and something in Morgan remembers him but he just can't put his finger on it. It would be totally awesome, especially if you did it! Pleeaassee

I love this. It would be nice if there was more of their interaction and then to their working together in Criminal Minds. I haven't seen this episode or most of the series but I love the show. Even if the murders frighten me on various levels. :)

this was so good!

nicely written

:D I luv it! XD

That was incredibly sweet.. made me smile.. Reid could have used a Derek Morgan to be there for him in High School..

This was definitely a great idea, and at first, it seemed well executed, but I really couldn't force myself to finish it because of the glaring spelling/grammar mistakes. Really, my only suggestion is to get yourself a beta and I'm sure your future stories will be wildly successful!

Aww - Think you could make a sequel where they actually get together?

Anyway...it was really cute and I luved it.

Great job -

sweet

I really enjoyed this. :) Your characterisations were bang on, and the consideration and deference that Morgan treated Reid with was completely believable. I don't think Morgan really fits the stereotype of a high school jock/bully, so I really liked it that you ddin't apply the mold to him, instead just letting him be more of a dark horse. Yeah, I kinda loved that. :P

absolutely wonderful characterization! i'm glad you've corrected the stereotype, especially since derek doesn't fit that mold :)

thanks for the proper justice

Awww! I loved it. I always wanted little!Reid to be rescued too!

-tati1

Great job!