Write on! Super interesting :D Go on writing! PLEASE :D

just show a sex scene

I hate embarrassing moments you made me go under my covers and say im done

ooh finally she's gonna give in but any way i like it, it's a good story:)

I think your fine in T.

You had me at the mention of grease!
And how I missed Doo Pak! I'd almost forgotten about him.

And it was just a dream. A hot dream. And now that Mia's been dreaming about it we know that she's definitely considering it. And she was so confident in her dream, more like a grown up version of herself.

So is Mia going to try and act out her dream or just act more confident in general? Either way I cannot wait to find out.

Update soon,
Katie.

'But that's how you do it!'
Best. Line. Ever.
Mia's insecurities raise their ugly heads again. Mia always was so insecure so it's nice you've stayed true to that. It seemed to be something Mia always had until PD10 when she was definitely more confident.

Mia can be a frustrating character to write because its hard to know just how she'll react to certain situations- and due to the fact she's always growing and changing- the way she might react to a scenario in one book maybe different to how she'd react to the same situation in another- but I think if this had happened in the eighth book then Mia would have acted the way you've had her react. In some ways she wasn't ready in the eighth book and other stories don't get this and have Mia jump into bed with Michael as an alternative ending.

I like how you're showing and continue to show how Mia is growing in your story and that she will be ready soon as a consequence.

Michael is a guy I guess, and they say that guys think about sex every thirty seconds. Still, is clear he knows what he wants. At least he's not being a jerk about it. My heart still gives a lurch at the phrase 'make love'. I know they know they love each other and Michael has said so before buts its so... It makes me melt inside.

Lily insecure. It's about time! We hardly ever get to see Lily vulnerable or reliant on Mia in the books, even though its clear she secretly really is. This chapter made me smile, who'd have known Lily worries about what she wears?

Lily's right, as always, Mia and Michael need to talk. The pinky promising thing was cute, I still pinky promise with my oldest friend. It's weird that such a silly gesture is seen by girls everywhere to be such a sacred and unbreakable promise when it's only a odd handshake.

Whoa. Lily's being forward. I think it's funny how she's so adamant that she has to lose her virginity first when she's not even with anyone. Lily always makes me smile.

I love them waking up together, it's so cute! And I love it when Michael calls Mia 'Thermopolis'.

Mia and her insecurities. It was funny to see how this scene would have worked out of it had gone the opposite way, with Michael instead of the friends.

Cant wait to read more

It was awesome

This is so cool :( I really like it. Good writing well done:)