I have really loved the story so far and I greatly hope to see it continue.

Nice chapter. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next.

Been watching South Park? You're too young for that.

Great Chapter!

And was the "Drugs are not cool, Mm'kay" a South Park reference?

Thank you for updating so quickly!

This is an excellent chapter. I'm glad the Tracy's have figured out that something is wrong and that Alan didn't take the drug voluntarily. And that they're figuring out that they need to spend some time getting to know Alan again.

Can't wait to find out what happens next! I'm on the edge of my seat trying to guess what Brendan's next move will be.

I read both chapters and really enjoyed them. Anyway well done and update soon xx

If there's one man i hate right now it's the Irish man. Someone should kick his but to the other side of the world and back.

Poor Alan. His really mest up isn't he?

oh no poor Alan! I really hope Brendon doesn't get close to him again but i think his the one that is gonna hurt Alan

Hmmm. Is it legal to threaten an Irish guy you meet in a bar on St. Patrick's Day?

Another wonderful chapter!

Okay, a number of things: 1) I hope the Tracys manage to stay one step ahead of Brendan in his quest to retrieve Alan. 2) I hope Alan manages to find someone in his family or Tin-Tin, that he can trust and stick with. That way, maybe he'll be less likely to try to escape his family and find Brendan. 3) I think Brendan better be afraid, very afraid...messing with Scott's little brothers isn't something many live to tell about. :) 4) I hope they can get all this news/TV mess sorted out.

Thanks for the update! Loved it!

Great Chapter!

Great story!
Please update soon!

Great Story Thanks for sharing it and keep going

I'm so glad you're writing again!

This was a great chapter. I'm relieved Virgil figured out something was wrong. Can't wait to see the reactions from the rest of the family.

Congrats on business going well, and good luck with getting a laptop. Please try not to leave us hanging for quite as long for the next update!