| Reviews for Time trips |
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Nanomi12 4/7/13 . chapter 5Like it cant wait for the next one hope u can update! |
bumble.bee.kawaii 2/18/13 . chapter 5update soon |
BooBearPurpleHead 1/26/13 . chapter 5LOVE IT! |
Guest 1/18/13 . chapter 5 Well, this is an interesting story with potential. Though, I will say that you're sentences need some work and that you're chapters are very short. That's okay I guess, but it makes the story somewhat hard to follow. I wonder if the demons (full and half) can see Guardian Characters- oh wait, you made Amu's disappear. Does that mean everyone else's is gone? Does that mean Ikuto can't change into a cat-person anymore!? Oh, woo! *cries a little* Anyway, I wonder what's going to happen with Amu, she has been missing for a year. I l'm really glad you made Ikuto find them first; I can just imagine everyone's faces as Amu tackles this random guy, and then when they realize that they're in the Modern Era! |
lilly 1/2/13 . chapter 5 you lazy fucker you need to do more :-) just kidding |
Nightshade9802 11/6/12 . chapter 5I am really glad you went back to this story but it does feel reaaallllyyyy rushed... it could use some fill but I love the idea! |
xAuburnAngelx 6/17/12 . chapter 4So, you're on writers block, huh? Sorry to hear that :( |
xAuburnAngelx 6/12/12 . chapter 3Take as long as you need to! :D |
Nightshade9802 5/28/12 . chapter 2Great chapter! I loved it . |
xAuburnAngelx 5/28/12 . chapter 2I sort of figured that Inuyasha wouldn't trust her ; I'm sure Amu would have more questions about this place XDD Update soon! :) |
Angeline134 5/28/12 . chapter 2ok first off I'm just being honest to help so don't be mad at my critiques and the first thing is you need to make the chapters longer if you want more readers 2 paragraphs isn't going to catch most readers' attention and second you have a few spelling and grammar errors so I suggest having someone proof read before each upload cause spelling/grammar errors happen to everyone but so far it seems like an interesting story so give it your best and work hard to improve |
xAuburnAngelx 5/24/12 . chapter 1This'll be interesting, I can tell! :) Update whenever you can 3 |
Nightshade9802 5/24/12 . chapter 1I love this story so far! Keep updating please! Nya |