you always write thought provoking stories

that real stories

i loved the intensity and the message you showed

that there are saviours out there do not give up hope ever!

Wow. Amazing tale of how one small act of kindness can change events for multitudes of people. Great story. Should be must reading for all teen

WOW x

Its a real problem for teens and that does seem like the only way but sometimes it only takes one kind jester to show not everyone is like that thank you I loved it

the first part it's very moving, and unfortunately very real i'm happy you gave us an HEA

thanks

Powerful stuff. Kids can be so cruel and it's even crazier when these kids are in high school. It was a tough read but things like this happen all the time. Let's hope there are Bella's out there to help those people through it.

Amazing, thank you so much for making a happy ending

I hate bullies- hate, hate, hate them. As a teacher, I'm glad our school district and others around the nation have taken a strict no tolerance bullying policy. There is a foundation that was started here in Las Vegas that spreads the simple message of: Be Kind. It's the Josh Stevens Foundation... You should check it out.

Its really sad and disturbing what jake and james did to him to make him almost become a monster he would regret, bullies are people who are insecure and have been humiliated or treated badly by someone, so they lash out to those that are weaker to make themselves feel better but it can back fire on them. These two are lucky Edward was saved by an angel or they would be one of the unlucky ones. I loved the ending I would have love to have read more..Thank you.

Bullying is such a horrible, horrible travesty. I have never been able to understand how anyone can purposely humiliate and hurt another person. I have made it a point to teach my children to always be kind to others and to talk to all the kids at school. My children are still in elementary school, but I want them to learn now how to treat others. You never know what one kind word could do to change someone's life. Words can make or break a person. Thank you for writing and sharing. I wish all bullying and hazing situations could turn out this way.

One act of kindness can alter the path ones life follows. She chose the right time to change his path forever. I'd like to think they go on together.

Wonderful. Congratulations good job.

I was reading fearing constantly for him. I was disturbed by his walk back home on the freeway, what happened in that room, his misery and dispair.

And then, that little flick of light and hope that is Bella and her kindness.

Beautiful O/S, really.

Thank you for sharing.

Was hoping for muftichapter. So much more to tell

Sad, sickening, then so hopeful...sometimes it does take only one, small gesture to make a very big difference. Thank you for sharing this!