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IFacebookedYourMum
2005-10-30 . chapter 1
Squee.. Fujitaka family fics always make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
And when baby Touya snarled and poked him in the knee..
Bless.
I wonder what Nakuru would do if she ever got pictures of baby Touya.. I've got the giggles now.
Very sweet story, but considering that it was published about three years ago, I'm guessing that there'll be no more?
Yours until vampires turn vegetarian,
~VampirePeaches~
maeyan
2003-10-16 . chapter 1
so *that's* where Touya got his snarliness ^_^

There were a couple of points where I tripped and lost the story, though, the biggest one being:
"Fujitaka-sensei, what is he chewing on?" Nadeshiko asked, smiling for Sonomi [..]

Why does she call him Fujitaka all of a sudden?
kirayasha aka kira
2002-12-28 . chapter 1
Sweet story! ^^ luv kira
kyouhi
2002-07-10 . chapter 1
Waaaaaiiii!!! that was the best waffiest fluffiest Fujitaka/Nadeshiko fic ever!! i havent read one in a while! i luved the idea of Sonomi giving Touya some of his traits that he doesnt have from his parents. Well thought out and great idea. very funny. I bet Sonomi luved doing it, too. Its just like Sonomi to order Touya to 'Give it!' her hairpin back. Fujitaka-sensei seems to nice to say that. Only Sonomi could've done that. Oshigoto ganbatte ne!
L-chan
2002-06-08 . chapter 1
I thought this was just wonderful. I love chibi Touya! What really struck me as interesting was how Sonomi played with him, because later she's only interested in Sakura.
Crystal Mage
2002-06-08 . chapter 1
Oh, that was so very cute! I love it! I know that Sonomi wasn't really allowed over there too much but she still went over, but I never thought about what the effect of her visits would be on Touya. This is a great story, but I have a hard time imagining Touya as a one-year-old poking at Fujitaka and disobeying everyone but Sonomi. It's very nice to see Nadeshiko being mischievous and I loved how Fujitaka had to kiss her because she was too pretty not to kiss. So cute!
varon
2002-06-07 . chapter 1
Yay! ^_^ As I told you, I liked the first part a lot, and now that it's complete, I like it more. ^_^ It really exudes that waff-y feeling, and not in a romantic way, so that's really something. :) I like chibi Touya! And his standard glare. Although right now I'm picturing Syaoran. lol

You know, dear Chelle, this fic is so romantic and "loving" (and lovable, lol) that it just makes me sadder because this might be one of the times Fujitaka misses when Nadeshiko dies. >.
Priscilla
2002-06-05 . chapter 1
That was absolutely the cutest thing I've read in months! I love how chibi Touya seems to bond closest to Sonomi, even disregarding Fujitaka and Nadeshiko in favor of his other mama. Maybe she can account for his constant scowling when he grows up? Nadeshiko was just so mischievious, just like a little imp and Fujitaka was adorable in his not wanting to get even further on Sonomi's bad side! Touya hissing and poking Fujitaka in the knee while snarling, "Omae" had me grinning in delight. Your writing is expressive and wonderful as usual and I love your lightherted take on the Kinomoto/Amamiya family!
inabsentia
2002-06-04 . chapter 1
awww, that's so hanyaaaaaaaan! luv those bad habits sonomi's teaching little touya! the snarling, the poking, the omae... *starry-eyed* so scheweeet!

ok, i'll stop gushing now...
meemee
2002-06-04 . chapter 1
aWwWwWw... that was so cute! sweet! great! wonderful! fujitaka is so funny... nadesico too! n to-ya is sooo cute~!

i was going to review yesterday, but right when i finished the fic, my computer went berserk and i couldn't! i was so ** off i couldn't tell you what a great fic it was!! XP...

anyways, keep writing! luv yaz, byeee!!
s' old fic
2002-06-03 . chapter 1
I know I already gushed over this n times before, but let me say it just one more time (for posterity's sake?) --- your Touya is adorable, your Fujitaka is adorable, your Sonomi is adorable, your Nadeshiko is wicked. XD But Touya-chan is the cutest of them all. I'm so glad you're letting me adopt him. (C'mere, sweetie, I'll give you a lolly. XD)
Smash/Turnip Girl
2002-06-03 . chapter 1
That was really really good! I've had enough of fics with Sakura in them, I wanna see more with Fujitaka in them! Awwww, baby Toya! ^_^
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