And what did MARILYN do to deserve to be locked up? Couldn't you have written it as Marilyn simply visiting Lily in prison and having to hear Lily's pity party?

Huh?

not very bad story is this chapter going too be update any time soon when the next chapter gonna be out because i wonder what lilly and maylin is going too do too granpa and herman by haveing them in jail

Great! Time Lily and Marilyn get what they deserve! Maybe you can make a prequel before they went jail, OK?