"But Emma's face was open, the corners of her mouth tensed with a smile that threatened to appear at the first note of approval from Regina."

I liked how this line conveyed Emma's eagerness for a crumb of positive response from Regina!

Great story! I would love to read more!

Interesting little story. I love your writing style. You write the Emma/Regina relationship perfectly. I do hope that you'll continue. Great job either way :)

PRECIOUS! I wish this was more than one shot because I Love it. They were together willing to protect threir little family and Storybrook Awww it just melt me away with the cuteness!:-D

really nice story - well written - I liked it - hope you continue it - thanks for writing and posting it

So... Does this mean that once the curse broke people could leave Storybrooke? Because obviously they arent there anymore.

I wonder what horrible things Gold has been doing in their absence to the people of FTL.

Come on, we need another chapter please

I really like this story - it feels like it could be expanded to more chapters.

Oh gosh, this is lovely. I hope you will continue it. I'd love to see how it develops.