enjoying this love Thomas and Louis too!

Ahh :D Lenny from causality

Hi! I love this story and I think you're a great writer! There's a lack of good whitechapel fics, and I think this one is promising to be one of the best, so I strongly encourage you to keep writing. I really don't mind that you stray from canon, as long as you keep up the good writing. I also like your OCs. But I want really badly to see some more of Joe soon, cos he's my favourite... Write on!

The first chapter was very cute with his roomates! I love how you managed to give them depth and characterization so they feel canon and natural, even though they are OCs. I guess the second chapted just feels a bit weird because this isn't really how it went down, but whatever. I like this story and I am excited for the next chapter. (I am actually looking forward to more scenes with Kent and his roomates than the actual characters of the show oddly enough.)