You see him very darkly. I nearly started cryin too, when I read this. Its so... full. I don't know how else to explain it. Great job, as usual.
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Am now going to read more of yours...

This was beautiful! Very poetic. I love this. Keep up the good work!

You should be a philospher! I liked this one as much as I liked "The Blade"!

Painfully wonderful. Such beautiful poetry I have yet to see til now. I hope you keep up and write more. I look forward to reading them.

well no ** this is awesome. its my sisters, how could it not be?

This is the best serious fanfic on the site. It is truly poetry, and beautiful at that. Keep up the good work.

Short, but absolutely beautiful. Really, the way it just flows is wonderful. I love the way you get into his psyche. Good job!