Hee, good chapter! It was fun to see Monty and Xzar and that infamous ogre. I thought the bit where Monty told the girls they weren't his type was pretty funny! :)

Occasionally in the dialogue, it wasn't easy to tell who was speaking - for example, when Xzar said "We can give ya this healing potion" (Monty would use 'ya', Xzar 'you'), and when Monty had a line in the paragraph after Xzar was the last character mentioned.

I enjoyed the adventuring - it's always fun to read about those two mad, bad companions wandering down to Nashkel. :D I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.

Neat to see another BG story starting up! Your note about extra storylines and characters does intrigue me, it's always interesting to see new plot twists and changes. I liked reading the start of it. There were a few spelling errors, like "worse (worst) day of her life", and "Get back you fend (fiend)!", "Jheira" rather than Jaheira, "Prada" instead of "Parda". I like how your protagonist is a quarter elf, it's good to see more than just sparkly half elves in the world. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

This looks like it might be fun - I want to see where you take it. I like how you avoid the chores at Candlekeep while still putting enough in to lay a basic framework; Imoen's relationship with Kora, along with Gorion & Parda were nice to see. Threatening to tickle Imoen was amusing - as was seeing the fairy dragon not do exactly what her mistress wanted.

I'm mostly interested in the bracelet and what you'll do with that. A fun beginning.