I love this so far. The way you described how Hotaru felt was simply fantastic. I really hope Hotaru finds her soul mate and can convince him to join her quest.

This is HotaruVegeta right? They are one of my favorite pairings and I hope to begin my full-fledged fic about them soon (I have so many projects up!). In the mean time, if you'd like to read my HotaruVegeta poem "Distant Desire" and leave a review I would really appreciate it.

Rain Crystal

It is strange but i like it

i liked it, no suggestions though. cool name, elementas, very interesting. Please add another chapter soon! well, ja ne for now,

-Dark

woah this is really cool. PLEASE update soon!

Please write more! I want to findout how Hotaru and Vegeta meet.