| Reviews for Tempo |
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Regin 5/3/13 . chapter 27I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon! |
casualmoose 5/2/13 . chapter 27I really like the self reflection moment that Bea had, I think that was done beautifully. Do you think you'll make a sequel, you know since you said there's three chapters left? |
JayKayAy 5/2/13 . chapter 27That was brilliant. Apart from the live-crab-pooping analogy in the A/N! But I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the way you incorporated her relationship with Barton. You write so well while staying true to the original characters, it's a pleasure to read. Also, your developement of Loki is...I don't even know, brilliant doesn't even cover it! |
no-MY name's Anonymous 5/2/13 . chapter 27yeahhhh...Bea was right, he was pretty nice, until that last part :/ weeeell, nobody's perfect, least of all Loki :) thanks for the lovely update! |
HanVanHelsing 5/2/13 . chapter 27Loved the line about the dragon. Writing is great. cant wait to see more. HVH |
Bronze Star 4/25/13 . chapter 26u just gotta feel sorry for poor, slow, thor... :) would love to see a drunk duck again, or even a drunk tony. look forward to reading more |
HanVanHelsing 4/22/13 . chapter 26Cool, great story. Even though I think Loki is the awesomest villain ever, I think I would feel weird if Bea and him ended up together. Just feels blech, I guess. I think you should try to add a bit more character development with the other characters, and maybe she and Clint can make up. He my fav! Following as of now.! HVH |
FattySkeleton 4/11/13 . chapter 26dont get her drunk. bad decisions are made when shes drunk. |
clusterlizard1 4/10/13 . chapter 26Finished within the next five chapters? Don't speak such blasphemies. I shall have to ask Thor to smite you. |
Protagonist Of Life 4/8/13 . chapter 26Finally! Tony got over his man-period! :D |
Protagonist Of Life 4/8/13 . chapter 25It was just one stupid kiss made by an intoxicated and stressed out women! Suddenly she's The Lord Of All Fucking Evil?! Clint was out of his mind to, and did they blame him for stealing that guy's eye?! Nooooo! Stupid Fury and his stupid-ness. |
albert12 4/8/13 . chapter 26This. Chapter. Is. AWESOME! I absolutely loved the piece with Thor and the pop-tarts. I'm glad Bea and Tony are getting along again! |
nothing new in this world 4/8/13 . chapter 26New chapter! XD I was so ridiculously happy when I saw the message in my mailbox this morning! That was great, as usual. I cracked up and laughed my butt off at two passages of your chapter: the 'conversation' with Fury (the image of Loki hovering in the background and making Bea considerably uneasy was actually very fun), and the prank played on Thor and his poptarts-that one was just hilarious. On another note, it's very interesting that Bea now had to go public as an official Avenger-or not really an Avenger, she was kind of vague on her status, wasn't she? I can see it changing a lot of things in her daily life so I'm really looking forward to seeing what you're going to do with that. As for Loki, you mentionned him in passing but Bea hasn't really dealt with the consequences of the 'Loki Incident' yet-any chance for some sort of awkward but hilarious face to face sometimes? ;D hehe Thank you for the update and take good care! NNITW |
Protagonist Of Life 4/7/13 . chapter 21Time Lord powers? Go Doctor Who! |
Talliana 4/7/13 . chapter 26I'm sorry, but i so got no sympathy for your Ducky. If she didn't Need the Money, she would just tell them that slavery was outlawed and where they can put their dissapointment. As of now it doesn't look as if she gets much out this deal. Ditch 'em, Grey |