I loved that; nice ending too. Prod buttock was one of my favourite phrases.

this is fantasic i love the books so this really made me laugh

That's really good! Way better then any poem I've made..

Nice. It's a little rough on rhythm at parts (especially at parts where it could have been easily remedied, for example by changing the "two metres" to an appropriate amount of feet), but it's not bad, and even funny at parts.

This is coming from someone who named her piggy bamk "the Widows and Orphans Fund". How I love it! I love the Watch as well, and poetry iss so much fun. Yet again, the comma thing, but all in all, I love it.

That's so cute. :)

I love it.
I love it.
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

hehe... this is cool! All my faves are watch members too!
As dreamkin said, the comma usage is a lil bit over the top, and that's something you need to watch in poetry as it can affect the flow of th epoem. Aside from that it's a great little poem! funny too ^^

hmmm....are you by any chance related to Captain Carrot? What's with all the commas?

Well, despite the erratic punctuation, its a funny little poem. All my favourite characters are Watchmen too and i like the last two lines:
'They may not always kick arse,
but at least they'll prod buttock.'
Nice. *dreamkin