|Reviews for Virus in the Machine|
| Jimmy Collins 5/18/13 . chapter 1
are you planning to continue this? It's quite good.
| Minecraft Guardiansaiyan 3/23/13 . chapter 1
More! Maybe chapter 2 as a one shot about them goofing off with those new powers?
| anonymous 2/21/13 . chapter 1
Best thing ever!
| boop 11/13/12 . chapter 1
please update soon
| Hawkbelly 11/6/12 . chapter 1
This... Is a really good story in both idea and writing style. I'm loving reading this, and I hope you update very soon.
| boop 10/10/12 . chapter 1
please update soon
| MarabouChocolate 8/22/12 . chapter 1
This story is so good and I finally found one that didn't make Desmond and Alex lovers.
| Lizeth 8/8/12 . chapter 1
Oh, I like. Alex is actually quite nice here and he and Desmond get along well. I like this a lot.
Hope to see more!
| Izashi koruto 8/4/12 . chapter 1
please continue the story it's really entertaining and I like how desmond gets into all the shit he's in.
| Laptop Newbie 7/10/12 . chapter 1
Very plotty, and I love the whole idea of Alex actually being an actual virus in Desmond's system. I do hope they don't merge. I was thinking of something more violent but this ain't so bad.
| Yanslana 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Interesting way to cross the universes together, since the fic isn't marked complete I'm gonna take a wild guess and say there's more to come...
I like your characterization of Alex in the fic, where he's not a psychopath with zero regard for human life aside from Dana.
| Yoshtar 6/26/12 . chapter 1
this is great, i have no words for how much i want to continue reading this (im not, OMG IM A RABID FAN, WANT, but im above this is incredibly interesting.)
its well written and all the bloody irony, oh god the irony.
this really needs a few more chapters
| kenokosan 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Dude! This story must go on! I mean the sheer awesome that is proto-creed, this story is on that level. :) plz update habibi!
| ShinobiTwin05 6/11/12 . chapter 1
OMG continue continue continue for the love of the best videogames CONTINUE! XD I f*ck*ing love this story!
| BeckonBacon 5/28/12 . chapter 1
Oh yes, the Templars don't stand a chance now. Very nicely written! This story is everything I would expect in an AC/Prototype crossover. Good job in incorporating the POE and Dana into the story, and the characters' personalities are accurate. Also, I don't know if you purposely mentioned the 'teleportation' ability as a reference to Revelation's multiplayer, but it was a nice 'easter egg' there. Thank you for the story! :)