yay - dang... the last chapter was hot! *nosebleeds* im sorry but ill just be over there fainting *drops to ground and goes to heaven*

LOVE.
I just can't say anything else bout it! Just freakin love it!
Hopefully you can make it turned into M *winkwink* you get me? ;D lol
AND OMG Tsuna Y U SO CUTE? Gosh I just love your way of writing cute Tsuna!
and yeah, I agree with you about the matter of cyber bullying. I know mine will get reported soon :P
But a friend said that in 2002, something like this happened and it just went away; hopefully it will :)
I'll be waiting for the next update; hopefully it'll be soon, xD

omg omg omg. Reborn! Tsuna! The amount of RebornxTsuna is awesome! RebornxTsuna! :DDDDDDDD Awesome chapter! Great story! Love it! Like love love love love love it... :DD Can't wait to read more! :DDDD

Dude! I already read the important mass of deletion of stories on and it's from the link you let us readers see. WTF? These people from Critics is going around giving us authors mean reviews and not only that, they've got the guts to curse the story with their sharp SHIT ASS words too.

Hey, if they want to tell us to fix our story, then just tell us about it straight to our face. Don't try to go around and curse the story we enjoy making like it's a piece of trash.

Also, there this info I've got after reading from the link you post that when we reply back to them with our own curse words. They've got the guts to tell us of all people not to that. THE FUCK! NOW THAT'S WHAT A HYPOCRITE PEOPLE WOULD DO!

We here are civilized people and we already live in the 21st century. We're not cavemen that tend to spit whatever we want to say to others without even contemplating the feelings of others.

Oh, man. Sorry for the long rant. I tend to that a lot nowadays. Especially if it involves a certain you-know-what forum.

Anyway, other than that. I just hope you can continue to update your story as well. It's a good story that's for sure. Just keep up the good work and I won't forget to read and review 'kay. _ .

CiaoCiao .

So true, so so true :/ I have just read your post, and the pictures of the reviews? *sigh* I knew they were bad but this? it makes me sick and sad, bulling is just something unnaceptable since I was a child my family has always told me to that if I want respect I must respect, my mother says:'if you don't like what you are receiving watch out of what are you giving' so how do they expect to do not have such an angry response from writers and readers if they say so many awful things? I really don't get it, this that they are doing is low, rude, cruel and so many other things. I'm sad because i'm seeing my favorite writers and stories dissapear one by one because of them. yes, there are some stories that I don't like but hey! nobody here is a profesional in the art of writing so is not fair to judge and insult them, this is just fun and as you say they are breaking the most important rule.
I'm really glad because you are not leaving :) I have already lost two of my favorites authors so yeah i'm sad I cannot read they wonderful stories anymore, but it was their decision.

I'll wait for updates :D

see you

Thanks so much for the link to the website. I've heard about these Critics United people, but I didn't realize just how bad their bullying has become.

And, looking at some of those examples on the website as well made me feel really disgusted with them. It really is bullying. And what disappoints me further is that the official website administrators have done nothing to enforce their rules of no bullying or harassment. It's just really despicable.

Sorry for making you read that whole thing, I'm sure you don't want to hear my complaining.

But I really am thankful that you've brought this to attention. Critics United needs to learn some respect.

I have to agree with what you say here. This site, posting stories and letting our imagination fly is to share with other people, hear what we think for their story either good or bad, and if it's bad, we try not to be too mean about it and speak of what part we didn't understand or like.
And here's another thing here, very simple...if people don't' like, then don't read it.

why I have the feeling that Reborn is gonna to 'mark' Tsuna by having sex with him XD oh well he is Reborn which mean he is sexy being a incubis suits him, really, almost too much he is practicaly a demon in khr a really hot one by the way XD. I'll wait for the next chapter and yes you are evil for leave me like this :P

see you

i love it XD cant wait for the next one XDDDD

Giggled at luce's desire to be a mama to a boy... Sex-deprived reborn means bad news for innocent Tsuna! (and good news for fangirls!)

Of course I really like Luce ! She's so cuute ! I hope she will enjoy of Tsuna XD, and Reborn too ! Tsuna is so lucky !Reborn is so sexy ! A real sex-deprived demon XD !

Huuuurry for sequel !

awesome chapter

Luce's so lucky! She can dress Tsuna up :3 Reborn's already possessing Tsuna. Sweet! :D

Hey, there. Its good to see that you update faster nowadays. I like it. The chapter was great as well as the plot. Its really hard to see an incubis without being sex-deprived at something or someone right.

If you wanted to write a lemon soon, don't forget to change the story rating, 'kay. Anyway, just update your story like before and I'll be sure to read and review or you. _ .

CiaoCiao .

So does that mean he would go back to normal after he have indulge himself with cute Tsuna? But I do hope he will treat him differently from the others... also does Reborn always make the light his lover? If he does... I really feel like he had cheated on Tsuna... But at least Tsuna will have other people that will be pinning for him right?