|Reviews for The Established Relationship Sequel|
| Annoonimus 5/5/13 . chapter 13
Why are you not updating ? whyyy ? :
| my mind is blank 4/5/13 . chapter 1
I've really enjoyed this epic. Have added both stories to my community Death Note Afterlife. Hope you continue as this is one of my favorite DN stories.
| neko-neko queen 12/27/12 . chapter 12
I love you.
I love this story.
I love the last story.
I love how you made L
I love how you made Light.
Or at least update?
| sarupetto 11/16/12 . chapter 13
very good story! i'll wait for more ney!
| BlackPanther101 11/4/12 . chapter 13
Awesome! I love the new information we got at the end! UPDATE NOW!
| LaLa 10/25/12 . chapter 13
I'm loving this story!
| ReadingWolf296 10/22/12 . chapter 13
Again can't wait for the next one! You got me hooked!
| NinjahNeachy 10/16/12 . chapter 13
Ahdjakdgakjslsg! I can't deal with this oh god. Light took a bullet for L and L was scared when he didn't heal
| Juliets 10/16/12 . chapter 13
Hi ! Don't worry, being very lazy and always late for everything, I can't exactly complain ! x) Plus, it didn't took you so long, compared to some other stories I'm following...
Ok, so I COMPLETELY enjoyed the whole "robbing/hostage" story, from the beginning till the end ! Seriously, I laughed very hard... xD Especially because of L, who has a strange reaction and Light, who's pissed at him for trying to help their robber xD
Ok, my favorite moments are : "In case we get robbed."
"No, really. It happens. You'd be surprised." NO REALLY, L ?
"I didn't mean it insultingly. A gentleman doesn't seem like an interesting thing to be. I don't consider myself one. My date isn't one either, although he does a better job impersonating one than either of us. What's your name?"
"My- what the fuck? I'm not going to tell you my name!"
"I promise not to pass on the information, if you'd like." Huuum, L, you know that the purpose of wearing a mask is not to give away your identity in the first place, RIGHT ?! And it's called a genius ! . Tssss..
"You can't come in."
"May I ask why not?" L looked at the man for a prompt. He shrugged. L turned back towards the door.
"We're naked." IS THAT REALLY THE FIRST THING THAT COMES TO YOUR MIND? My, my, you little pervert !
I like the fact that Light gets injured if he tries to protect L (NO, I'M ABSOLUTELY NOT SADISTIC ! I SWEAR !.. Or maybe I am... But just a little bit... :3) because if Light was completely invincible, it would have been too easy, and there wouldn't be ANY ANGST ANYMORE ! O.O (Okay, definitely sadistic...)
"When I shoved you, I had forgotten I was a shinigami." *.* AAAAAAAAH, SO CUUUUUTE ! *gone fangirling somewhere else*
Huuum... I apologize for this poor review, and particularly my fangirling, but, hey, how can I not do so when reading such a good fiction ? 3 (Whaaaat ? No, I'm certainly not trying to flatter you to make you release the next chapter soon (A)... :D)
Anyway, see you in two (long) weeks ! :)
P.S. (Well, maybe I'm going to review all chapters from the beginning like I said I would, IF I'm not too lazy... )
| AreYouReady 10/15/12 . chapter 13
Squee! I like the lighthearted, although considering the enjoyment I got out of "A Field of White," I'd probably like dark, too. Seriously, your fics are just great. The whole injury thing is fascinating.
| JulietS 10/3/12 . chapter 12
WHY WOULD YOU STOP HERE ?! Aaaargh, so cruel...
Anyway, I started reading The Generic LxLight Story yesterday and just ended what's written of the sequel... I LOVE IT !
I was a little apprehensive to read -another- fiction taking place while the both of them are handcuffed, because, let's be honest, there a lot of them, and I personnally got bored of it.(I am more onto AU...) But I don't regret it ! ) You manage to lead the story to a complete different yet likely plot, without your characters turning too much OOC, which I think is not that easy to do.
Another thing I like, is that in those kind of LxLight fanfictions (the one that takes place while they're handcuffed and where they invariably fall for each other), when you reach the part where Light recover his memory, either he becomes evil again and then kill L (WHICH BROKES MY HEART ! WHICH IS THE REASON WHY I DON'T LIKE IT AT AAAAAAALL !), either (well, that happen more often...) Light realises he loooooves L so much he can't kill him, and then he repents and become good again, which I found really too much OOC, because as much as I hate it, Light has an EVIL personnality that killed thousands of people by writing in a death note the way normal people would write their shopping list, and cannot just DISAPPEAR because he suddenly fell in love with some strange Panda-like. So I find your alternative, Light's schizophreania rather ingenious and pretty likely ! )
I also looove L and Light's conversations, they really have some very good replies :P I can't give you exemples, because there are actually too many, but yeah, basically you makes me laugh a lot. x) Maybe one day, if I'm not too lazy, I will quickly go through the whole story again and give you all my favorites moments. Actually, I will if you update the story in the next week ! :O Yep :P
I have to say that I prefer the original story to the sequel, because I can't get used to the idea of Light as a Shinigami ! O.o Yeah, in the beginning of the sequel, I basically couldn't imagine Shinigami-Light otherwise than as a kind of skeleton Ryuuk, which I find pretty disturbing when I try to picture him with my beloved L... O.O'... Anyway, a Shinigami-Light is still better than a dead Light, I won't argue on this. Actually, I REALLY, REALLY thought for a moment that you were killing Light for good (He dies in the end of the 29 chapter on 30, plus I didn't know there was a sequel, so yeah, I almost joined Light-kun in his heart attack... U.U') and I almost cried... Even after I knew you didn't really kill him and he was gonna come back, I really felt sad during L's depression...
So yeah, basically I love your writing and I love your fiction ) (And believe me, I'm pretty picky, so you can feel proud :P)
Just a little detail : could you separate your paragraph with any sign like '***' or anything else when there is a time skipping ? Because I find it puzzling otherwise and I have to re read it again and again before I understand there was a time skip. Like in this moment :
"I refuse to wear a tie."
L reached up to loosen his tie again, only to be discreetly elbowed in the kidneys. By the time his eyes stopped watering, he'd been led into the damn pretentious looking building."
Hope you see what I mean...
Anyway, loved it and hope you will update soon ! )
P.S. : English is not my first language, so I apologize if I made any mistake ! Actually, I'm French, so if you ever need help for a translation... :P
| Zambino 9/30/12 . chapter 12
Their banter reminds me of a comedic sitcom, it's a good thing. I found it funny that L thought going to the opera was "too much". Didn't he have an armchair flown in from France overnight?
| NinjahNeachy 9/28/12 . chapter 12
I legit laughed at the end because some idiot really thinks he can pull a gun on my precious detectives xD
| Cj Quinn 9/17/12 . chapter 12
OMG IF I'D KNOWN IT WAS YOUR BIRTHDAY YESTERDAY I WOULD HAVE REVIEWED TO SAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Happy birthday... Good chapy...
| AreYouReady 9/17/12 . chapter 12
I love this story, and it updates so fast for something of its caliber.
Also, happy birthday, Shayla! And cheers to many more.